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Harusameiro
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
Whoa!
When I felt like the story must be nearly over--because it didn't even occur to me that someone could write this many lines in rhyme--I looked over to the scroll bar and saw that I was only half-finished!

I am just amazed at the rhyming in this piece. Even though RonDraco is not a pairing I endorse or even usually tolerate reading, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Harry is very princely, and the others seem to be, strangely enough, in character.

I hope you make more poetic stories like this, but maybe make them a little shorter or break it up into chapters? It's difficult to read a poem if it just goes on and on without any page breaks.
Zaete
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
This is brilliant! Plus it's really funny and sweet.
How did you get it to rhyme so well? I could never do that.
juliette-zabini
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
my ship of choice is D/G, but you had me at "Buggery hell! I've got the wrong tower!"
:) it's awesome! you...you're like the ballad empress!
The-Rose-Has-Wilted
2008-05-16 . chapter 1
Cute!
draco0malfoy0is0mine
2008-04-05 . chapter 1
What the **! This story is lame!
Clairful
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
Best story in the history of the world!
RainWashesEverythingAway
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
xDD
that was awesome.
I funny, and well done.
^-^v
cha-11-Erise
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
very funny and witty! this is so great!
SharpCookies
2007-08-11 . chapter 1
Wow... this must've took you awhile, eh? Worth it, though!

It was a great tale to read, with very good rhymes. Though I was a tad confused and mad at times.

...

Great, your fanfiction got me rhyming.

xD Anyway, great job!
Squibakou
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
Loved it! Funny, great story, great rhyming scheme, fabby. Thanks for that.
Amanita Jackson
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
i think this goes on the list of my fav fairy tales...although i probably shouldn't read this one to the kids i babysit, as they might ask what 'shag' means. or 'cross-dressing'. or...heh. yeah.

brilliant!
alli-sun
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
That was too good to be true. Aww, Draco's a CROSS DRESSER!! I can so picture him in a dress, it's adorable and a big disturbing at the same time, I mean modern drag queens usually put in fake parts, but there's no such thing for them. So Draco remains flat-chested, though since he's Draco Malfoy I'm sure he'll look fine. You really made this really witty and nice, it's hard to rhyme and execute a good story, I've tried and usually the rhyming ruins it. But here it just makes everything funnier. Awesome! n-n
Rosalyn Angel
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
That... was bloody BRILLIANT!
syntic
2007-03-21 . chapter 1
;_; I adore this! This is so good! T_T So funny, and wonderfully well written! Amazing job on this! XD
idylosis prawn
2007-01-11 . chapter 1
How...very witty...

LOL, really, it's very good! ^_^

Keep it up!

~SiP
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