Good. A little sappy and I don't think that you really showed Carth's character. Exteremly well written, but I had a hard time figuring out whether Revan was light or had turned back from darkness with Carth.

OMG! that was really good!
Would like more... continue on?

too good! I loved it! Very cute and yet it fits with your character development in other stories. Now, if only my peeps were as well-developed as yours...

That was cute. It is really hard to do romance, I think without getting overly sappy and cloyingly sweet. Good work!

Aw...

I really like this. It's sweet but not saccharine. Dustil helping to pick out the crystal is a nice touch, and I love the premise. You're sympathetic to both and them and make a great bittersweet romance out of it, wonderful!!

(Now do an unrequited Malak one!! sniffle.)