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| trallgorda 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is fabulous! I've never seen anything like it, and it is truly unique! Please write more! |
| Lyokofan1 2006-07-18 ch 6, anon. | abusePlease please please update! I'm reading this in July 2006 and you last updated a year ago! Please put up the chapter 7 you promised. It's a good story! Don't give up on it! |
| Xana 2006-01-29 ch 6, anon. | abuseExcellent Cliffhanger |
| Artemis 2005-11-26 ch 6, anon. | abuseawesome! keep writing please! i will keep reading if you keep writing! promise! |
| Otritzi 2005-11-16 ch 6, | abuseUpdate again, this fic is very interesting, I love how you've gotten it started...I feel like hitting myself for skipping over this fic so many times. |
| bobbyneko 2005-09-25 ch 6, | abusesweet, detailed AND realistic. youre an excellent writer. please continue |
| Ransomed Heart 2005-09-24 ch 6, | abuseI just sat and read the first six chapters, and I must say I am impressed. I love how they kids have handled the situation, you're writing this very well. I look forward to chapter seven! |
| Imagination Queen 2005-08-01 ch 6, | abusewhoa, that was good, but one question, where's Odd? Oh, well, this is getting really good, Update soon. ttfn Imagination Queen |
| Mewberries 2005-06-09 ch 6, | abuseOh man! This is the king of all cliffhangers! I'm so glad to see this updated, but agh! I want more! Update soon! I just love how you write for Jeremie! He was so in character and so adorable! ^_^ And I love how Ulrich and Yumi are all ready teasing him (they'll get theirs someday), but friendly like. :D Fantastic chapter! I can't wait for more! :) Especially with the sneak peek!! |
| Pup 2005-06-08 ch 6, anon. | abuseE~ Yey new chapter ^^ Heheh, certainly took ya long enough though ;P XDXD You've done a great job with it all, and what a great cliff hanger. Can't wait for Chapter 7. -Pup |
| Lady Epur 2005-06-03 ch 5, | abuseIt sounds like that's what really happened! I LOVE it! Write more! I can hardly wait to see what happens next! |
| Mewberries 2005-03-11 ch 5, | abuseBwa! I'm so sorry I didn't review this sooner! This chapter was great! I leapt for joy when Aelita strongly told XANA she wouldn't help him. Go Aelita! And go you, CBIzumi! Another fantastic chapter...and I can see why you've been itching to write chapter 6. Yay! Team CL appears, or at least Jeremie for sure. ^_^ Keep going, please, I can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
| Star Way 2005-03-09 ch 5, | abuseWow... that was such an amazing chapter! You've worked with this story and made the extra puzzle pieces left out of place in the show itself come to light, but in a beautiful, eloquent way. I wouldn't want anyone but you writing this story. ;) It's so awesome, and chapter six looks exciting. I can't wait! :D |
| Julia Poprocks 2005-03-08 ch 5, | abuseAH! You have no idea how happy this story makes me! I just - AH! I love it soo much!! Every new chapter leaves me in awe.You must have spent so much time on this I can't even fathom it. And in the next chapter I get to see how Aelita finds Jeremie! *jumps up and down* I am so excited! As I've said before, this is the BEST Code:Lyoko fanfiction ever! I love it! Keep up the great great work!! *HUG* -Poprocks |
| Little Vili 2005-03-08 ch 5, | abuseUltimate sweet. And that is still an understatment. Wow, things are really coming together here, this is all so exciting. Im bursting with energy from the suspence you are giving me here. The preview was also pretty neat as well, it really makes me want to see it even more. Very nice job on the whole story, I wish I could do this good. Your style is simply amaizing. I hope you get the next one up soon. ~Vili~ |