This story helped give me peace over Vincent's death. Thank you, and it's well written.

Wow. That was wonderful. A little too long for that particular moment in the film (which is one of my all-time favorites), but still compelling. The last line summed it up perfectly.

i enjoyed that . poor vincent but i think you were right. he died and max cam to life . nice. kudos

Thank you to all my wonderful reviewers! I could not write without you!

The Lady of Light

Omg this story was really really well done lol. It sucks that he still had to have died *sob* but it was really well done. It seemed very well planned out and thought out. I could totally imagine max saying all the things that he did. So I guess what I was trying to say was that everyone was VERY IN character. It was awsome

I love how u write things. It very proffessional. I have to check if you've written anything else. Hopefully yes. If not then GO WRITE SOMETHING. Perfereably another collateral story. That would be awsome.

Good Job Darling

-Sweet Treats

Awesome chapter! Poor Vincent, I wish he didn't die, but o well. Anyway, I hope you write more Collateral fanfics!

I thought this was beautiful. Very very dramatic prose telling of the ending. You watched the commentary, too, I see. :) It was great, very very insightful, both the commentary and your story. I loved it.

SJ

dude awesome poor vincent lol keep it up!

Awesome story! So glad to see that this category is here! Thanks for sharing!

DM

Excellent work. While far from perfect and EVER so slightly OOC in places, it brilliantly captures the lip-smacking visceral charge of the movie.

Very nicely written! Good mix and use of the movie and your own elements in the story. Desriptions were good. I do heart Collateral fics and was pleased to see this up. Would love to see more from you :)

Lady of Light - lovely! A wonderful piece - just lovely!

Very dark, and very good. Although I would personally consider Max to be the light in the darkness, and the question asked of Max by Vincent (as Vincent physically died) as the sign that there was still a bit of a human left somewhere in that void).

It was a great mental painting of the end scene of the movie that left the audience thinking, wondering and dreaming. Wonderful job! You get a cookie!

Spot on imagery, and great characterization! I loved this movie and I love this fic! I'll wait eagerly for your next story!