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Anonymous
2005-12-04 . chapter 9
Mario and Luigi should be sucked into kirby's world for a chapter and have to face metaknight because king dididi put a mind control device on him then get sucked back to Smashion
KirbyDreamer
2005-09-25 . chapter 5
I like this story. Tumbleweed.

BURN
Sentrosi
2005-09-25 . chapter 9
MISSIONS! Yay!
Flowerstar
2005-09-25 . chapter 9
You're not inspired by anything?! Um... I can't think of any missions though. Currently, I'm working on Chapter 18 for A Mario Birthday Party. Anyway, I saw 30 minutes of footage of the new Zelda game, Twilight Princess last, last night. So anyhow, Suferljb emailed me today and yesterday while you were working on your fics. She seems to be obsessed with this book called Gone With The Wind. Um... do you watch Foster's? I really wanted to do a parody of the Foster's Home internet game called Mid-Flight Snack. Good luck with your next chapter! ^_^
Kitsu Kurasei
2005-08-31 . chapter 8
Sweet, I'm the best reviewer! :) The easter egg wasn't very eventful but hey, I'm the one that voted Bonus. So, wonder how things are gonna go in Smash Village? Ah well, time will tell. Oh yeah, tell Mario things aren't much different where I am and that I'm wondering on the treaty too. And yes, I did like this chapter.-Kitsu
Sentrosi
2005-08-30 . chapter 8
Computer broke, using other one. New one comes tonight. So far this is progressing well. The story, i mean.
Flowerstar
2005-08-30 . chapter 8
Nice chapter! :) Yay! :D Another chapter is next! ^_^ I can't believe you mentioned my crossover and my Kirby sleepover fic! To be honest, I also got inspired from this sleepover party called Power Puffy Sleepover. It shows in the summer holidays on the UK Cartoon Network. It's kinda like The Powerpuff Girls and Hi Hi Puffy Ami Yumi were teaming up to throw a party. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next one! :) I liked the Easter Egg chapter but it's not even Easter yet.
dillon
2005-08-27 . chapter 5
BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!BURN IT DOWN!
Sentrosi
2005-08-21 . chapter 7
LEARN! Now mario's house is dead!
Kitsu Kurasei
2005-08-21 . chapter 7
Burn, hehehe, BURN! Yeah... So, from you're response, I'm on the crazies list then? WHEE! *Grabs a falling Kirby from her perch on the uneven cliffside* *Tosses him back up, he smacks into a ledge above me* Sheesh. *peels him off and sticks him ontop of it* I vote Bonus!-Kitsu
Flowerstar
2005-08-21 . chapter 7
Um... who is the best reviewer for your story is the pen pal? Anyway, good chapter so far! :) You should know that our joint-fic is up already. Good thing you didn't e-mail me last night, me and my family were at the Trafford Centre. I can't believe that Mario Kart DS is coming out on my birthday month, November! Anyhow, I bought the Joss Stone album and another DVD of The Super Mario Bros. Super Show!

BONUS!
Sentrosi
2005-08-12 . chapter 6
This is pretty good. I haven't read the shroomgod thing yet, but I'm off to soon.

BURN IT!
Suicune
2005-08-12 . chapter 6
This is a great story and the bloopers are halarious!
Kitsu Kurasei
2005-08-08 . chapter 6
Hello Clario. Here you go. *Holds up a firehose and shoots Kirby... Who flies off a cliff...* Damnit. Anyway... I don't usually like stories with such little description but you're really good with it. So I'll give you a break. Update soon Clario, because I'll know when ya do.-Kitsu
N64 Chick
2005-08-04 . chapter 6
That is some pretty funny stuff. I really liked the food fight bit and the bloopers, which kinda remind me of my first two fics. Well done!
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