great, one of the best ever

Just wanted to tell you that this story was awesome, assassination is awesome, and overall i think you made the abusive family story and the KaibaxJoey relationship really realistic, and i liked that :3! CHEERS.

ah hey.. i just read the first four chapters of your story... and i loved it (will read it to the very end, of course)

there´s just one error that´s nagging me...

THAT BROKEN WRIST... where is it?

will write more after reading the whole story...

~loscar

I WILL read the rest later...cause i keep meaning to read this and i skipped a few chapters to get here and it's getting late anyway...so i'll finish up tomorrow after school hopefully. anywho, i hope kaiba and jou does get together...so i'll see yea within 24 hrs.! good story so far!

I really liked the story a lot. I don't think that it would need to be continued, but if it was i would defiantly read it

aw... what a cute and really unique story! totally love it

Thank you for this great story

I loved this story, especially the writing style. I don't know what it is about your style, but it just seems... perfect, it's dark and angst-filled while at the same time not feeling heavy, which is an amazing feet that I have never seen before in a fanfiction, most are either too heavy to read or light to be point of pointlessness, and to find one with such great balance is a rarity indeed. You are very gifted and I was very impressed and surprised, especially since the subject matter was a bit unorthodox (Seto an assassin for the mob? First time I saw that, I thought, 'what? That sounds like something my cousin would write.’ Very SPIKE channel in plot, but I was pleasantly surprised and happy with how you went about everything.)
I can’t wait to read the sequel.

This is an awsome story! The angst is given at just the right doses and Joey's character is perfect. The idea of Kaiba being an assassin suits him perfectly, even if he hates it. Just one thing, I think you mentioned that this taking place in America. The anime is technically set in Japan, why the different setting?

O...

this is my favorite chapter of them all. Seriously... in any case, congrats. You really should write a novel (if you haven't by now).

WOW ! DAT WAS AN AMAZING STORY! AWSOME! GOOD JOB!
AW AREN'T SXJ SUCHA CUTE COUPLE!
GOOD WORK ^-^!

Omg i can't believe myself. How could i have not read this fic sooner? TT_TT you really really had me at the edge of my sit. hm o it took me about 5 hours to read this XD my butt hurts. Anyway really Seto's white rose you really really have a knack for writing it is a wonderful gift you have. and i love this fic as much as i loved all your others XD you freaking rock! i just love how this was filled with angst and fluffy moments the made me want to squeal like the fangirl i'm but couldn’t for the simple reason of deciding to read this fic at my school library instead of the comfort of my own home but I just couldn’t stop reading it. I think you had a very realistic view of Seto and Joey relationship through out your whole story ocness was unheard of in this fic and once again I must remind you, you really do have a knack for writing. So in conclusion i love it love it love it!
and i like the ending as well. all in all i give this fic a bazillion stars ^0^ o and how are you by the way hope things are going a little better at home. Well always hoping the best for you Chibi-The-Small


p.s. write more SxJ fiction!

Finally, I finished this story! School kept me from reading as much as I wanted to. Now, for my favoret part other than enjoying the works: flaming! Eh..just kidding. You know I wouldn't.
This story is just 'wow' worthy. I loved it and if I had the time and the means to, I would have read straight through without stopping like the other one. The plot was amazing, so full of action and suspense, and the romance came in at just the right time. Nothing seemed to move too fast, nor did it move too slow either. The characters seemed to stay in character until events made them change and you perfectly displayed and changed them accordingly. Once again, a beautiful story from one of my most favoret authoresses. I of course, am once again late with a review with the story, but as you said, "Better late then never." Unforunitly, I have to say that the last one I read was better, but that's only because your writing improves with the time and expirence you have with writing. I apologize, but the truth is to be said.
A sequel? I believe it deserves one. However, I don't think it needs one. It ends with the right ammount of information to leave the reader guessing on their future, yet enough for them to leave it to their own imaginations.
Once again, an awsome job and thank you for writing such a great peice of work. Now, to go choose, yet another, from your range of stories.

-Anesta K.

I've actually read this story a number of times, but hadn't reviewed yet.

I want to say that I very much enjoyed it. I LOVED the concept and found reading Seto's thoughts as he dealt with everything was very nice. Also, thanks for giving Seto and Joey a positive ending without turning it into fluff which wouldn't have fit the story. And thank you for your complex characterization of Seto.

'Ko

wow that was a really good story. took me ages to read like but yeah, wel good.