How cute! Allen and Folken are my angels too!

too sweet! wonderful story.

*cries* ... *sobs* That was *sniffles* beautiful... I love how you captured Eries...

Beautiful beyond words! It's short and precise, you've exposed Eries' buried feelings for Allen into the open...this kind of writing is very admirable. Wow. You're so good at writing Allen...more, more! But I really loved this fic...it's so unique. Despite the short length, a lot of issues-key issues-were covered in it, like Allen's obsession with a dead love, Folken, Millerna and Dryden, Allen's feelings for his sister...wow, great! Margot

hm...this was very well written. you never really see much to do with eries. the only fic i've ever read with eries being more than a face in the crowd was scars in the heart and the folken and eries files (both very good). i know that the producer dudes said that eries really did love allen, but still, i think she'd make a better couple with folken. i don't know why. i just do. still, i like the concept. nice feeling. ja! meliae

No paragraphs, really, but the story itself is really good. Eries is very angsty, but I think that's what she probably really is like.

Oh this was so cool! (and well written!) Good job! It made me think from a different perspective and I like fics that make you do that.