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| Cavalleria Rusticana 2006-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseUmm...good story but "Phantom of the Opera is not an oper. Also opera is originally Italian so Pegasus naming it "Opera de Domino" which is French isn't as proper as an Italian name. |
| Anonymous 2005-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like your story but your accuracy is off a little. "Phantom of the Opera" is not technically an opera; it's more of a Broadway Musical and there are many differences between musicals and operas. If Pegasus builds an opera house, it's only appropriate that "operas" are performed within it. There are millions of operas out there to choose from that would fit perfectly into your story! I'm not trying to be rude but I am a devout fan of opera and with people constantly mistaking musicals (especially "Phantom of the Opera") for operas...ugh...it annoys me, is all. Whatever, continue updating because the story itself is pretty awesome! |
| Cydney 2005-07-03 ch 6, anon. | abusethe ending's so cute. How long did it take to write this whole story I like it all to tell you the truth. |
| Baka Basher 2005-03-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseYou don't know me, but I've been a fan of this series for along time. I've read almost all of them with my little sister, and she loves them,too. As to picking the next story, I am really looking foward to and liking the ideas of #3 and #6 through #10. ^-^ |
| Baka Basher 2005-03-14 ch 6, anon. | abuseYou don't know me, but I've been a fan of this series for along time. I've read almost all of them with my little sister, and she loves them,too. As to picking the next story, I am really looking foward to and liking the ideas of #3 and #6 through #10. ^-^ |
| Kamper Drury Tales 2005-02-07 ch 2, | abuseOoh!! This is turning a bit spooky!! How will it end? Ooh!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!! Update ASAP, please!! Ooh!! (slap!!) Ouch!! Well, I'm leaving now. By the way, this was Narya the Blazin' Flame reviewing. |
| Swamphunter 2005-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAwsomeness- as always. Can't wait for the next parts. |
| Drake Clawfang 2005-02-05 ch 1, | abuseAre you gonna try and make Li Zhou a good guy? |