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lovincinnamon
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
It's so nice! :)
Amanda
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
"...ooh, another hot guy. WAIT. Is that Satoshi?" LOL Kinda random and definately pointless, but worth the read. Props! (loves this pairing)
alter ego
2006-07-09 . chapter 1
hehe sorry for stalking you like this but I'm sure you don't quite mind, right?

Great how you delved into Risa's mind. As a student, I can definately relate to her in this. You have a knack for short and simple pieces like these.
neko56
2006-03-20 . chapter 1
haha!! so funny!! i love it!!
crossXdeep
2005-08-25 . chapter 1
aww, i wish this wan't a one-shot. it would be a cute fanfic.
Kat
2005-06-29 . chapter 1
0.o that's it? It's over? WHAT THE HELL! WRITE MORE!If you don't you'll have to suffer! Ciao! ^.^
Itsumo-chan
2005-04-28 . chapter 1
Kawaii~! Haha, I like the way that Risa thinks. ;) I really like the way that you portrayed Risa in this fiction .. Oh poor, clueless Satoshi. Haha - This is my favourite part :

"Okay I admit it, I like the way he walks.

What?

You have a problem with that? Walking is an artform. He just happened to be good at it."

*LAUGHS.* Haha, I think that it's so great. (: I love this little fic of yours, really captures the essence of Risa.

P.S. .. I've been to your site, it's amazing. I totally agree with everything you've said on there - Risa's gone underappreciated throughout the whole series just because one thing that she did. I think that people really need to reconsider her. (: You've got a lot of evidence to back you up as well .. Go you!

Haha, well anyways, thank you for all of those sweet reviews. I appreciate that you take your time to read my fiction - bwahaha. As unworthy as I am, it's a living, right? Haha, hope to read more of your work soon! (:

~ Itsumo-chan
ekadihsiN iroaK
2005-04-17 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAhAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahahaHahahah!

very funny

HAHHAHAHA!

good job.

FLIBBIT (hehehe)
pinboo
2005-03-26 . chapter 1
aiihh! So cute!
JadOo
2005-03-07 . chapter 1
Heh, Risa's weird thoughts. so O.o to get into her mind though.
Good setting. Well done, in fact. It's the last place on earth Risa would be, but definitely one where Satoshi will be found. Great job on Risa's inward thoughts - especially the people-watching bit. :D It's true that Risa does dress modestly, although most people think the worst of her.
Two typos though (just because I'm nitpicky):
"He plumb nearly gave me a heart attack"
"...unervingly handsome..."

I NEED MORE SATRISA!
Arisadelle
2005-03-02 . chapter 1
AWESOME! We nned more of RisaxSat stuff. It's just cute! Like in the manga when they were paired as partners on the cruise and Satoshi ehem..."rocked over". AW!
Sexual Deviant
2005-02-26 . chapter 1
Aww that was so cute! Risa was so ridiculously cute in this little one-shot! So could've made this into something more but it was cute just the way you put it anyways. Loving your stories! ~Sally
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99
2005-02-07 . chapter 1
*snickers* That's was cool! I like the bit about walking best. *pokes Satoshi* He is excellent at walking... do not know how... ^^;
Are you going to continue this? I know it said "The End" in big bold letters, but shall ya?
Mimi-san
2005-02-07 . chapter 1
Cute! ^__^ nicely done!
julyeighth
2005-02-06 . chapter 1
Heh. That was amazingly in character for Risa and Satoshi. I really enjoyed it, and how she gives in at the end. I really like how she thought she was going against a book for Satoshi's attention.

One thing that bugged me though was the "sigh" in the "But no... sigh Why am I so lazy? I wish I was smart... or rich. Either of the two will do. Or no, married to some rich guy. Even better." line...
Maybe that's just me though.

Anyways, that was great! Looking forward to your AU fic...
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