Fantastic. :)

(In case you hadn't noticed, I really love your fics!)

it's so sad! I love it!

I wonder if it's because he's lost someone very dear to him.

You're quite the poet with prose.

...okay. Pretty good, not as good as the Neville fic, though.

Powerful and utterly remarkable, as always. Poor Harry. I want to cry again. :(

*LIZ

hmm, a bit dark for my tastes...oh, who the hell am i kidding? this is a good oneshot, i salute you for not giving a happy ending. Lots of people just don't have the stones to write a "f* the world" ending.

This is so poetic it sounds like a song. You always picture the hero being happy, triumphant, strong and surrounded by his friends- because they all made it through the war, some nameless people in some nameless place died, never people the hero loves, of course! Thanks for the dose of reality.

Nice. Short. Angsty. Best package there is.

All I can say is wow! *sniffle sniffle* How come I find all of the sad fic.s on a rainy day?

Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

Poor Harry

ya know, you can write a story based upon this. and this part can be the perfect prologue.

and not so sweet :( x

I wonder who he's thinking about when he says 'He's outlived them all, outlived the loving smiles and the frckled faces and the deep brown eyes.' It's good though, I like it.

What would have made this fic much better would've been reasons. It doesn't make sense to me why Harry would want these things back, at least not complete sense. You need to make the reader feel Harry's emotions. This was far too plain and quite boring in all honesty. I didn't connect with the character at all.