ROFL

This was the first Yaoi fanfic i ever read... and a couple day later, i literally spent 3 hours looking online for this story again! ^^! its so good!
First and favorite!

xD

I really like your stories! I wanted to see the rest of this one, but the websites you gave won't work.

omg. love. Or.. Smut Fest 2006. xD

*is so amused* XD poor Riku having to go through all that torture just for Sora to get a peep - was worth it in the end for him, though ~.^ Great story, the comparisons amused the crap out of me (*snerksnort* like a Twinkie..). Can't wait for the next two parts! ~

That was amazedness. The full thing, i mean. And more? You are too kind!

Ah~

That. was. very. HOT. :3

I want more... :3

You're a good writer. Continue being one~ ^_^

...Thatwashot... ^-^

OMG! Smut fest indeed...WELL...I happened to think it was just perfect. @.@ MORE NOW! It was so amazingly hot. I loved it. YAY Riku/Sora. I really cant think of anything else to say that wont come out as drooling or babble. I just CANNOT wait for more. *huggles you* PLEASE?

Yae for Smut Fest!! Whoo!! *waves a flag with RikuxSora printed on it* Awesome, aweosme, awesome story!! Very intense and hot and sexy, the make-you-drool kinda thing. And you coulda posted that middle part here; there's no rule against it so long as you rate it properly, which you did. I read the middle part, too. Twas just as good as the rest of the story!! ^_^ Haha, Twinkie-**. That's funny. Wahh, Aqua!! Here's a funny story: I used to be in love with that band, so I have two of their CD's on my iPod, which I was listening to while reading, and as soon as I saw the lyrics for Babrie Girl, I paused my current song of choice and went straight to Aqua!! And then of course, I stopped it when Sora did. Poor Riku, forced to listen to it (I can tell he's definitely not the Aqua type) ... not that they're exactly my favorite band anymore (after growing up a little and finally understanding what the lyrics mean, they didn't spark my interest as much anymore). Anyway, wonderful, again!! It was all perfect ... from beginning to end. Oogh, I just L-O-V-E-D it! It was uberly amazing ... and you're writing more?? *glomp* I love you. And the fact that you are an AMAZING writer just adds to the amazing-ness of your story; lemons aren't worth reading if the author sucks. Yup, anyway. Bravo!! I will be awaiting that update!!

Amber: Wow... that was... *awesome* (Yes, we went to the version and read that)
Ebony: Heh-heh... twinkies.
Amber: lmao, that was *so* funny. We were literally cracking up. =]
Ebony: I'm a nut, I'm a nut, I'm craazy...
Amber: ... I don't know her o.O
Ebony: Yes you do.
Amber: (lies!) Anyway. We'll be waiting anxiously for the next installment! No rush, though.
~Amber Tomoshibi and Ebony Kuragari of Impure Hearts

I think you should work a bit on your IC writing, 'cause since when do boys listen to Hillary duff, Aqua, or even the Backstreet boys... okey they're gay, but I know gay people, and they don't listen to girl-oriented music...

So next time take something more boyish...
What would be even better is that you make a bandname up, because then everyone imagen those to be the kind sora likes and riku hates, even though one thinks it's supposed to be rap, and the other thinks it's one of those smushy love songs...

sorry for this stupid comment, but it just kind of annoys me...

I loved that "story" Please create some more stories soon!

AH!Damn you! How can you just cut the story?! damn you !*cries* it so ** not fair!...argg...

i loved this fanfic and all, but i couldn't get to that website your other part of the chapter was! i was so ** off, but nontheless the fanfic was cool!! keep writing more fafic! ^_^