Ahh! Roy and Riza! So damn adorable, it had been so long since I've read a fic about them!

You did a good job of weaving together Romeo and Juliet with Mustang and Hawkeye without making it cheesy or anything; I think I'm going to look at Romeo and Juliet in a different light now. :D You also kept Hawkeye and Mustang in character pretty well, and I particularly liked how you showed Riza being the practical one and Mustang the romantic dreamy one. Nicely done. :)

Very well done _ So in character, charming and sweet.

FANGIRL SQUEAL This was ingenius- my class just finished Romeo and Juliet. Why can't we learn it Royai was beautifully written- thank you for making my day!

Aw, I'm so sad this is the last Royai fic from you that I haven't read. But of course, wonderful as always! I like Roy's last lines when he related Romeo and Juliet to Roy and Riza. It's so sad how they have to play along with the rules and can't be with each other. :(

Strictly professional, that was what their relationship was. He was the Colonel. She was the First Lieutenant. He was of a higher rank than her, and therefore, she was to obey his command without question, no matter how stupid or pointless the said command was.

I loved the logic in the above lines. And the 'Romeo and Juliet' theme in this story made me go "Sque!" like the happy shipper I am.

wow!

what a nice fic! it's so sweet! XD

Good job!

It's beautifully written, and I completely agree with Riza.

Thank you for sharing.

Kat

purplepenguin25 yahoo

Oh my god.

This story is nothing short of amazing. Beautiful and sweet...

I personally think that Romeo and Juliet is quite unrealistic. And in truth, I absolutely hated the play... but this fanfiction changed my initial opinion. It made me see the tragedy in a different light, and made me see that falling in love is NEVER thought out. Never planned and never really practical.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

WOW! So romantic! :))

*claps* Lovely! I'm such a sucker for great RoyAi )

ah...so cute! That was very well written. The ajdectives and adverbs weren't overused as they are in a lot of fics. I really enjoyed it. The ending was a little dissapointing though...GIVE ME MOORE! TTTT

I love this...

honestly, this was a wonderful take on this pairing...

Wah how sweet...

Muf... m (shakes with barely supressed, highly overdosed enthusiasm) The scenario so fit. Wonderful. He, her Romeo. She, his Juliet. And the symbolism.. Perfect. As Daphne Reynolds would say: Ya ROCK!