I like the story. I love the last paragraph of this chapter. Is there a sequel of what Harry does after this?

Nice job! I normally don't like slash, but I thought this one was nicely done.

I'm sad it stopped here, it almost feel's it didn't end. But regardless an amazing story, I'm not into all the severus/Harry Harry/Draco but I did enjoy this!

Thankyou!

This is quite emotional at times, and really got me going...you know almost crying over it. Its also quite sad and the end has an overall atmosphere of end and despair with determination all mixed into one.
There are also times when its almost as though you can feel how Harry cant breathe. Glad you did that little bit between parts as Snape's point of view, i dont thin this would have been complete without it.

Very well done.

That was just...dam*...wow. shockingly brilliant. my favorite line was the piece of advice the empath gives harry, "run with your happiness." that was a really nice way to "save" harry in a sense. but seriously, your fic wasn't just a fic. it really touched my heart, and im glad that harry doesn't find true love and happiness and fluff with severus in a cliched style. you put out the truth, bled it out, and refused to let your story become another in the thousands of hp fics labeled "abused!harry or depressed!harry or unbelieveably-uncannon-harry-but-just-read!harry." you portrayed the truth of a severely messed up individual--and who wouldn't be?--without disgusting sugar coating. your portrayal of harry's character was on-the-spot; you described severus' reactions perfectly as well. i loved that you put that severus' eyes were red either because he hadn't slept or because he was crying.

very sad fic. nicely done though.

LOVES


cried so hard when snbape pitched harry x

I am a very big SS/HP fan and it has the right balance of everything this relationship is supposed to be about. Harry is strong but has the right amount of helplessness that makes this story believable. The only story that is as good is this one is In one breath. You have kept Snape in character, whiich is the most difficult part of the Snarry relationship. Congratulations! Keep Writing.

Just read this wonderful fic and had to tell you how much I enjoyed it! Just the right balance of depression and strength so that Harry didn't seem too pathetic. As much of a SS/HP fan as I've become, I even liked the way you left it open in the end...a sequal would be nice, but even if you can't do that, as you claimed, perhaps a couple of new installments telling about Harry's hunt for DE's. Maybe even a future with SS after all the loose ends ar tied?

Brilliant. so sad, so wonderfully written. I can't even explain how good it was. Great job.

~aradonai

Please have a sequel! Its not too late!

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Missy Padfoot

It's a beautiful story, I added it to my favorites. I can't believe so few people have sent in a review!

Great work! I hope you do get to do a short or sequel in the future. I'd like to think some good will come of Harry ridding teh world of the rest of the death eaters.
Really wonderful story!

Excellent work. Keep it up.

Beautiful! At the end of 4 and he's like Sanpe hates me, i just wanted to screan out and tell him, he loves you Harry, he loves you! I'm a sucker for these situations. Great Story!