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Toushiroseyes
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
*Squeak*

I love love love your cuddly stories.

Never seen Blank/Zidane yaoi-way, but still I like it.

Great way you described Blank's body, stitches and all.
Loddleposh
2006-07-28 . chapter 2
Could you update this? Please? Good Blank/Zidane slash is so hard to find. Everyone wants Zidane with either Garnet (how boring and cheesy) or Kuja (ew...incest). I really am enjoying this and would love to see more!
Elendraug
2006-01-25 . chapter 2
Mwee, this is awesome. I like that you were brave enough to actually make Blank blind -- that's gotta be tough to write. It's been over a year since this was updated, so I'm gonna assume you've lost interest (believe me, I know how it feels XD; writer's block sucks), but I'm sure this would've been even greater if you'd kept going. :3

Hooray for FFIX fic!
Dark Chalice
2005-06-10 . chapter 2
please continue
Watarii
2005-05-16 . chapter 2
Oh my... this is wondeful. It's very touching... I hardly ever read such an emotive story, honestly. You've got to continue! I'll love you forever... ;-;
Yonaka Niji
2005-05-15 . chapter 2
Woo! I love Zidane and Blank! They were my first favorite yaoi couple ever! Please update soon, as this is an interesting story.
Oynque
2005-05-05 . chapter 2
There are many things to like about this story, with good writing overall, and Zidane/Blank being my favorite FF9 pairing. But I disagree with your choice to make Blank blind. I think the story would have been fine without this extra element of misery. It is depressing and distracting to me, as I've never thought of Blank as being blind. Early in the game, he participates in various fights (including the staged swordfight with Zidane) and later on, he is the navigator of the airship. Both very unlikely for someone who is blind. His blindness is not entirely convincing in your story either, where he goes pickpocketing with great success (until his victim is another thief), something which would also be quite impossible for someone blind.

I realize that Blank as blind makes for some extra heart-wrenching situations, but there is a point where things just get too miserable.
NekoNekoMeowMeow
2005-05-05 . chapter 2
I suggest you start writing again. Due by the date that it has been updated, it seems that you forgot to update. If it's for the lack of reviews, don't worry about it. I seem to have none, but I still go on about typing. I do hope you update soon. I never read a Zidane/Blank story. Please continue. As you said, you/we have a long way to go.

~GQ

P.S. Good Luck! ^.~
Ameki-Elisa
2005-03-09 . chapter 2
AW...Ain't it cute! Can't see Baku being so understanding about Blank and Zidane doin' it...but that's what makes it so cute! Hope to read more from you soon!
Marih Dimitri
2005-02-11 . chapter 2
So beautiful. *weeps* Zidane saving Blank...that's so beautiful. *weeps some more* Please continue...otherwise i'll be weeping to hard. *sobbing on the floor*

Vivi: OO; *sniff* It's so beautiful. YAY! BLANK AND ZIDANE!
strawberry poo kmoo
2005-02-10 . chapter 1
yay! I love BlankZidane ^_^^_^. It always interests me to see of what people think about how his skin became that way, and why he wears a headband. ^_^. In my fic he's kinda frankenstein-ish and... well, wouldn't want to give that away, would i? lol.

anyways, I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^_^^_^. I've had trouble finding anything more than BlankZidane oneshots in the past... XD ^_^^_^.

-spk
Ameki-Elisa
2005-02-08 . chapter 1
Aw, so incredibly CUTE!
And I like the way you make Ruby being her bitchy self! Please continue!
Marih Dimitri
2005-02-06 . chapter 1
Very good ficcie. I didn't know that Blank was blind?! Come to think of it...i don't really know the character of Blank that well, since i'm only on the first disc(sucks huh?)

Anyways, keep going on your ficcie. The suspense is killing me!
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