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| hypercell 2008-09-05 ch 10,  | abuseShadow. Or Faithful. I love this story. I dislike Fudge alot. |
| hypercell 2008-09-05 ch 7, | abuseok, so I love the story, but you are useing the word remark wrong. I just saw that you said English is your third language , so it makes sense. You write amazingly well. Totally off the subject, i am learning French in school. I was going to go for spanish but it didn't work out... |
| hypercell 2008-09-05 ch 4, | abuseI don't think muggles can go to Azkaban. I think just regular jail. And he should be in there for life... |
| hypercell 2008-09-05 ch 3, | abuseWhat is the metal thing on harry? besides the shackles, the wires near his eyes and mouth and legs and stuff? BTW, I really like this. |
| kat 2008-08-24 ch 41, anon. | abuseare you going to update soon or have you abandoned this story i love it - one of the best abused harry stories ive read - and i do that a lot! |
| Mad Mogg 2008-08-08 ch 41, | abuseThe kiosk is a brillient idea! |
| XxiceflamexX 2008-07-30 ch 41, | abuseI like this! a lot. It's really interesting and I can't wait to hear more.=] |
| jojobevco 2008-07-05 ch 41, | abuseThis is a good Story, it's a shame you abandoned it |
| Lientjuhh 2008-07-05 ch 41, | abuseGreat story... You should continue this story... I liked it... Harry being abused... Harry powerfull/smart... Harry friends with house-elfs... I like it.. Well done.. ;) |
| sandyrah 2008-06-28 ch 41, | abuseI think it's just absolutely adorable that Harry is helping out the house elves. It's very much a Harry thing to do. I like that in this world, Ron is such a stupid git. I love Ron, but Git!Ron stories are a lot of fun. I hope that you'll update soon, I am really enjoying the sweet relationship between Minerva and Harry, I think it's something they both need. |
| happy-reader007 2008-06-01 ch 41, | abuseWow. and wow and wowse wow wow. this is amazing. The story works well and i REAlLY like the way you portray each and every character. The story is good and the basis of the original is there but as a background not as a set thing. i also think dumbledore shouldn;t have a problem with the kiosk but prof. Magonalgal( sorry i can't spell) should. keep writing happy-reader 007 |
| bcsbookworm 2008-05-03 ch 3, | abusei like this story. i really do. |
| Corlath 2008-04-26 ch 41, | abusehey this is a fantastic story, i love the ideas you've put into it and i like that some one has finally shown the elves for what they truly are: another race and culture. i hope you will continue the story and update soon!! |
| EverD 2008-04-03 ch 41, | abuseThis is a really good fanfiction, but also kinda sad. I enjoyed reading it...and was even more gloomy when I found no more chapters to read, so you must up-date soon! And as for the kiosk...not sure if it stated it in the chapter, but why not have Fred and George also sell some figurines. They could sell those before quidditch matches and all that...but that's all I have to say...and offer. Please up-date soon! |
| HappeeGoLuckee 2008-04-01 ch 41, | abuseLove this idea of the kiosk. Thank you for the read. More, please? I really like this and would love to read more. *grins hopefully* |