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| magdilen 2008-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseCute. |
| Yvaughn 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseAn intriguing partnership. I just wish there were more of these! |
| Lirazel 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI love this. They're just both so in character. And I love the idea of nothing being the only thing River wants or needs and that Jayne can't bring himself to say no to her. He's such a softie underneath. |
| L. C. Brotherton 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseSimply incredible! You've captured Jayne & River beautifully. |
| Lattelady 2005-09-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I know I should say more, but at the moment I can't find the words. All I know is I've been there and done that, except for me it is the sea, not the black voic. |
| EclipseKlutz 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, I read both in the series--only reviewed this one, sorry. LOVE them both; you have a distinct style to your writing, and nothing seems out of character. Brilliant, basically. |
| cherylp 2005-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. Sounds just like Jayne and River. |
| Lokaia 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, I loved this. Absolutely loved it. You captured River's nuttiness and Jayne's own personal war of selfish v. compassionate. So much love to this story. |
| PrairieSky 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThis pieces are beautiful! |
| Dina C. 2005-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. Now keep going. :) |