the movie was great and this little fanfic has inspired me to go watch it again!

great job!

You give yourself to little credit, keep it p

I loved that scene in the movie and I love your little ficlet to go with it. I think you nailed Kagomes inner monologe perfectly. Great job

Awe, its cute how u added her inner thoughts during this scene. I really liked it in the movie. You did good, i'd love to see Inuyasha's POV. Can't wait for whats to come next

I've never seen the first movie, but I can say that I've seen the first several seasons of the show, and I do know Inuyasha very well. In fact, I have seen every single episode until the newly released ones lately. There was once a time in my life when I was obsessed with Inuyasha...well, not Inuyasha, but Koga, and I'd watch Inuyasha hoping that Koga would someday reappear. Miroku kept me entertained in the meantime.

So, in summary, I don't know the movie, but I know what the show is about. In fact, Dragonball GT is what pulled me out of the Inuyasha phase. There was an overlap of two months when I couldn't decide who I wanted to fantasize more about - Koga or Trunks. Hehe, we all know who won _that_ battle.

This is a very good chapter. Will you be adding more to it or will it remain a one-shot?

I liked how you displayed her thoughts about him needing Kagome, not Kikyo. I think it's sweet. You've kept him in character, wanting to say so much but like Vegeta he just can't say it, so it comes out all wrong... like how he called her stupid. LOL. I just think of one episode when Kagome screams "BAKA!" at him. I forget which one it was, but it was very very funny. In English she screamed "STUPID" or something like that, but I saw the Japanese episode for that one time and I was cracking up. It inspired me to start thinking of a scene in my own fiction where Pan can scream that at Trunks, but to tell the truth, I can't imagine him ever pissing him off that much. If anything, I have an idea where Trunks would get that pissed at Goten, but he doesn't SAY "baka." Piccolo says idiot, Pan and Ancient Kai say baka, Goku says dumb or stupid, Trunks says any other word as long as it is censored, and sometimes crap, Goten says.. well... he says yikes. he might say baka too. I haven't figured that one out yet.

Oi look at this, it has become almost an email. I should stop now. Hehehe. Great chapter. I enjoyed it X)