A great story. Very good.

Such a sad ending, but so cute. You just HAVE to feel sorry for Dawn.

All in all, a great fic.

maschan

This was very good, you got it just right. If you want to continue the narrative, who knows how many things you can do with it?

I love the ending. I feel horrible for Dawn. She went through so much to get her mom back...and she didn't remember Dawn at all.

Oh, this is great!! If you have not done so already, a sequel would be lovley to read. Poor Dawn!!

Hey, like the ending. Makes it more than just a happy fluffy story.

Like that twist. Very cool.

Oh, that was good. You should add to it.