Lovely story. I hope you are still writing Sam/Daniel. They make a good pairing. Pagan

Darn it, this is GREAT! Are you going to continue it? I think that it would be a really good multichapter fic.

I thought this was really good actually, very well written. Something I'd save on my computer and read over and over again with a silly grin on my face *g*

Sam/Daniel isn't really my thing...I'm to Sam/Jack, but it was pretty well writen. Very cute...LOL, I'm soo biased aren't I? But your Sam and Jack ones are definietly better!

Still, it was good!

nicely done. i loved it, intense but thoughtful. it was very good. i think i might like sam and dan flicks now.
kim

Um...

I think this story might go down a little better with readers if you put in a disclaimer somewhere warning them that everyone's going to act totally out of character. I honestly found it a bit distracting, really. I mean
A) Sam can kick way more ** than Daniel.
B) Even if Sam didn't kick Jonas's **, and sat back and waited for Daniel to do it, which is not her nature, Jonas (like Jack) was Black Ops before joining the SGC and would have been able to wipe the floor with an archaeologist.
C) Jonas died in season 1, long after Sam had broken off her engagement with him...maybe a little explanation about how / why he's there & together with Sam would help the believability factor.
D) I also find it out of character for Sam not to report an assault (and I'm assuming rape?). It always somewhat peeves me when fanfics have her just submissively accepting what the guy (usually Pete) did to her and waiting for some guy to come to her rescue. That is SO not Sam.
E) Just curious...how'd the coffee start brewing if Sam woke up with Daniel still sleeping next to her?

I'm sorry, I know I'm really critical. For what it's worth, the story's written well, but all of these little things that weren't explained or out of character threw me off.

-sil

You know I am not a huge Sam/Daniel fan, but this was a really great fic to read. Still wating on the rest of your other fics, so keep writing..I miss your fics :(

This is really great! Daniel is such a sweetie. I love him to bits. He'd be so good to Sam too. I really like when they corected each other's sentences. That was really cute. :)