I have been LOOKING for this story... or rather a story just like this. Hurrah that you are writing it and so well. Please, please continue. Lack of reviews means nothing. Your story is GOOD.

more please...

Finally! A Dorian Gray fanfiction that does not involve the LXG version and his vampire friend! You've mentioned that your writing style isn't similar to Wilde's, but it is nevertheless enjoyable to read. You must finish this! (Or at least update soon).

A lovely story to compliment a lovely book.

Oh my gosh! That was so funny when Violet fell from the tree onto Dorian's lap. When she climbd up and the men approached, I was thinking, "Oh no! Violet's in a tree, and Dorian's coming." Sorry, I got really into it.^^ Geez, Sara's quite a brat. I really loved this chapter, keep up the awesome work!
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Linwe

Yay! New chapters! Can't wait to read the next one! Dorian is so curiously, yet stubbornly charming.^^ I liked how you called the pomegranite "Persephone's bane," it was so clever. And I loved the dialogue they exchanged. I still think there;s going to be something going on between them.^^ Again, you had great visuals, especially in the beginning of this chapter when you described the road with the metaphor of it being like a serpent. I'll drop another review for the next chapter. :)
xoxoxo
Linwe^^

Hallo. Lovely little fic you've got going here! I love how you have written Violet, she's not some unbearable Mary Sue, but a girl with real ideals and a purpose. Dorian is lovely, just as I imagine him, though to this day I cannot picture the blonde so instead go with the Stuart Townsend look from League of Extrordinary Gentlemen. At any rate, the dinner party type scene was really vivid...I could see these people speaking of these subjects in my mind's eye...brava! I eagerly awai more...please don't get discourgaed by few reveiws...the more chapters you add, the more reveiws that come.

Yay! I loved Violet so much! Is somthing going on between her and Dorian?? I need to know! Do keep going! I especially loved your beautiful visuals and descriptions, I felt like I was actually in the room looking at Dorian, or outside loking at the old house! Oh, and I just wrote a Dorian Gray poem if you want to read it. I wrote it right now in computer class (where I am now) haven't got caught yet! I just love your stories, and you're right, they aren't exactly like Oscar Wilde's style, but it's still very good.
~Linwe

Sorry, lazy to log in, I should leave many reviews, but I'll put them off for tomorrow, though yours I did want to review today! I should read the Picture of Dorian Gray now, really! You know, the writing style really reminds me of that of writers fromt he Victorian era. And the way the ladies are dressed and I like how the park is so gloomy, and that birdsong allegora is very well thouhgt-out! Go you fellow-bride! :-) I want to see Dorian finally! I'm very curious!