haha XD lmao

haha cute. sequeL?

XD

haha I love it.

omg that was cute and interesting! shuichi is such a dork! ^^ eiri has no reason to be upset about it either! ^^ please keep it up!
Subo-chan

Now... that was... funny odd and overally good. thank you. keep writing!

LOL

lol. that was... very hard to describe what exactly it was, but it made ma laugh. you portrayed those two quite like i imagine them. wonderufl job! =)

Oh wow, the banter you write between them is so lovely.

haha. Wow, that made my day. I can picture that conversation so well in my head, too. Nice job!

^_^ Very well done.

...mew!
I liked it, but I noticed there aren't any question marks...
Doesn't metter much, so don't worry, just check othat, ok?
Oh, and write more one shots, I love them all. My favorite, as I have said before, is Smile.
Keep writing.
Ja ne!

Heeheehee...that was funny and cute!

OMG. Eiri has a sense of humor. Excuse me while I send him to a loony bin. Can't wait for a new one!

aww, that was so cute! i only just started to read the manga (just got thru the first volume and wanted to read some fanfiction ;P) and i absolutely adore the two of them! ^.^ i know a lot of ppl who think i'm against the whole guy/guy thing but iy's really that i'm against the hiei/kurama thing from yuyu hakusho. *pout* boy love is cute! ^.^ and yuki and eiri are so lovable! i can't wait to read the next volume and continue reading other gravitation fanfics.