Lloyd's so cute :3 xD
hope you update soon :)

LMAO he ran screaming from Colette xD

Finally! I've been waiting for one of these ^_^

Please Updated! I'm really looking forward to this story!

xD I love the 'lol, you noob' part. I can totally imagine Kratos (and Zelos') face while he's doing that! n.n

Kid Lloyd's so CUTE! =3

So, uh, how old's Lloyd now?

Oh my gosh! The picture of Kratos saying, "Lol, you noob," was something that nearly made me die of laughter! (I'm serious. I'm eating an apple, and then that part suddenly appeared out of nowhere, and the next thing I know, I'm trying to loge a large chunk of apple from my throat while laughing my boney arse off.)

The whole "Monster Sealing Charm" thing was absolutely adorable. I couldn't help but think of a child Lloyd's face as he gasped and looked at his "Daddy" in awe...

Update soon.

LMAO!!
Update soon!

the story is funny and sweet.update soon ok.^-^

^_^ very good. the charecters are exactly what they are like in the game.

this is really good. it's funny too. it's cool. i hope you up date soon.

Kratos may have little experience but he has talent. continue soon.

AHAHAHA! This is so funny! Fav.s now!
-LuE*

OMG THIS STORY IS HILARIOUS! XD I LOVE IT! PWEASE UPDATE SOON!

Zeros... Poor Zelos. He has a little admirer, who can't even pronouce his name!

This is a good comedy story, and I feel very sorry for the group, having to try and cope with an even more babyish Lloyd.

All I want to know is, where are Regal and Presea? So, I'm wondering more about Presea than Regal, because I think Regal sucks.

I really want to know how this finishes.

*laughs* I love the monster scene; it was so cute! :D And it'd be just like Zelos to use Lloyd to pick up girls. *rolls eyes* Hope you update soon.

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