Awesome!

Everyone's in character.

Hilarious, in character beginning segment!

Hilarious, particularly Norm's snark, and the Mark Chang segment!

Great job with Norm & Tootie interactions!

Great chapter!

Great story!

This is great.

The interaction between Mr. Turner and Dinkelburg was in character.

Norm, Tootie, Cupid, and everyone else in the scene were also in character. I like Norm's snark, and that the "Trixie Tang fiasco" was mentioned. No one ever mentions that, so I'm glad someone did.

I like that you mentioned Norm's feelings toward his lamp, about it being a prison, though I've noticed that after that, his feelings toward it aren't brought up again.

So, basically, its wonderfully FOP style!

Great chapter!

Great story!

Welcome to Drizzleboro/You are Now Leaving Drizzleboro, Please Drive Past Us Again’.”

No the other out of place teenager in the goofy spy gear,”

Gotta love those lines!

I really love your writing!! I think the relationship between Vicky and Chip is sweet, And its awsome that Norm is Tooties Godfather. Good job and I cant wait for the next one!

LOL! awesome story *laughs* i cannot wait to read more^^ please continue

I have to say, you have much talent . I wish you luck in your future accomplishments. I'm new to fanfics here, and decided to read around and see what stuff is in this section. I wrote my first fanfic and I'd like it if you would read mine and tell me how I'm doing.

Well I really liked this fic, too bad its over. Ha. Ha. Vicky and Chip making out, Mark having to marry a psycho, a sarcastic jerk having to listen to little Tootie, what more could you want? (Well acually, watching people make out isn't all that). Good epilouge though.

Oh and I've gots a little secret for ya. I was thinking of mabey writing a sequal to "Trapped In Eternal Darkness"!

Well keep up the good work, later!

I liked this chapter! Pretty funny! I kinda feel sorry for MArk though. He got rejected by the love of his life and he has to marry Mandie. I thought he would've tried harder too.

And I was shocked about Tootie's wish, why would she want Norm as her godparent? I mean seriosly. And believe it or not, I really liked the end of the play. Where Chip picks Vicky up and they kiss. Wich is weird cuz I'm not into romance that much.

Great Job! I really liked what you did
with Norm! LOL...anyways Great story Iam off to
read the sequal.

fantastic! funny, humorous, great parody of The Phantom of the Opera, and an awesome way to end one story to start another one.
XD poor Norm. Norm and Tootie are a funny team. can't wait for the sequel. ^_^
--KwazyKandyPie aka Kelly Ann--

Awesome story even if I'm a total Vicky/Mark fan, sorry but Mark was first. ^^; Poor Norm though, to be degraded like that. Norm should force Tootie to change his kid's diapers when they're born and then he'll make an excuse like it's illegal to poof dirty diapers away or something. I don't know. But anyways great story and can't wait to see the sequel! *claps*

I give this story five stars for some awesome conclusiveness. I really love this fic. ^_^
I look forward to reading more of your work.

I love this chapter. Tootie finally has a fairy godparent or should i say, genie godparent. Either way, I love this. I hope I get to hear more of your fics.

awesome! Yay for Chip Skylark!
man, this is hillarious. i love Mr. Turner's rambling lines about Chip. XD
i like this part too:
"Cosmo glanced from Wanda to Timmy in confusion.

Are we directors or the chorus? "
can't wait for the epilogue. ^_^

Ha Ha! Norm got out-smoofed!

It was hard for me to get into this story at first because I'm not into opera... just musicals. I tried, though, and I was pleased.

I can't wait for the epilogue.

--Blue