I really like this fic...it's written very well.

-Soiel

I like how you set the whole story around red, and make the whole plot twist around it. A very clever and well written story, and the pairing is great, too! ^_^

well, this was my first ravenxlucius fic i have ever read. ok..that made absolutley no sense. anyway,it was not as bad as i thought. i`m not homophobic or anything but i didnt quite know what to expect. i think i shall read more lxr fics now that i have overcome the hurdle of reading one. anyway, well done! i think this fic was ...sweet. i mean cute. lucius is just so innocent and raven is so ...angry. it`s adorable i guess! lol.anyway, is this a one shot? or is there more chapters to come?

Wonderful story! Raven/Lucius is a sweet pairing and your writing is lovely. Great job :)

Aww...how sweet!

I'm not very in love with the style of the writing in this fic, but it is sweet.,.. And better than a good deal of the FE fics in this section nowadays.,. e_e;;

Long live Raven/Lucius!

(cries) That was so absolutely way beyond adorable! (cries too much and dies)
Karel: Here we go again. She dies on every great RavenLucius fic. You'll have to excuse her, she's a hopeless RavenLucius fangirl.
Really, I loved it. (huggles fic) It's so great, I think I'm gonna die! Again! (reads fic 100 more times and loves it oh-so-much) Seriously, my romance fics look pale in comparison... T_T

I HEART YOU. ::glomps::

^^ Awesome, I never thought of that pairing... (well, okay, I lost the game before I could finish it... but STILL...) Huzzah, you get a cookie. ::gives cookie::

Squee! *glomp* This is so sweet! ^^ I love this fic! Write more, pwease! *chibi eyes*