Wow, good start. Apparently what Yukimura has isn't Guillain-Barre Syndrome. It's an unknown auto-immune disease that's similar, so basically, the creator of PoT made it up, just some random symptoms, but it could be cured with surgery, the real thing can't. Either way, you captured it perfectly, good job!

-Saph

Awesome!! Such a sad story!! please continue!! oo must goo read more SanaYuki ficss...

hey, that's the greatest sanayuki fic i've ever read.
plz update fastly!

T_T *blubbers* syu-chan! so sad! T.T hurry! write the next bits! ^_^

No. I cannot let you kill yukimura off! Not when sanada is so adorably clueless! That would be cruel. Heartlessly cruel, so don't.

Sanada/Yukimura is always a sad pairing... *sigh* But that's the way it has to be,ne =( I'm so soft hearted nyah... I enjoy reading angsty fics... Is that normal? Anyways,hope you'll update sooner nyah ^^

that was great! it's by far the only fic i've read that really goes to explain Yukimura's illness and everything. applause for that. will be watching out for more, pls update ne!

This story is so swett and sad at the same time. It sounds like Yukimura's love is to stragic as he is ill and will never tell Sanada.

I find the story well written and it is something thing different.

Please update soon.

=) I like your Rikkaidai dynamics - they're so real and so much more like the teenagers they are. And a b-day ficcie for Fuji? ^^ yay~ Great start to this, yay for SanaYuki, and please keep on writing~

Having spent time in hospital myself, I would say You are potraying Yukimura's illness quite well, and trust me, the fic is neither boring or draggy. I feel you are creating a great atmosphere of doubt and worry that's working well here. Looking forward to more.