what the fuck was that?

yusuke should have fucking killed the bastard!

and talk about keiko being ooc...she's loved kruama?

she barely knows kurama!

and do you REALLY think that yusuke would let keiko go like that?

wow...this story SUCKED!

I love Kurama/Keiko pairings!

MSF

_ Aw...that is so SWEET! This is a great fanfiction, I really enjoyed reading this!

That was great! The way you portrayed Yusuke's reactions was on point. The tension between Yusuke and Kurama had me on the edge of my seat. And Hiei's rude sense of wisdom was good. Please keep it going.

Honeychica04

I love it! I'm really dying to find out what happens next. Update!

Love it! Hiei's relunctant involvement, slow realization why, and droll humor; Yusuke's insistance on finding out what happened to Keiko and blasting of the door - all perfect. I hope you can hurry back with more.

Very nice! I especially loved Keiko's assumption that Kurama was gay and with Hiei. Best of all, you let them be honest with one another fairly quickly - I'm very tired of stories that play off misassumptions for the bulk of the story. Well done.