Oh, sure he won't...
Very cute story. Lots of hugs for it!

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So cute!

You make the pairing make sense. And that right there is a high compliment. This was really fun to read. ^_^

Haha, yes, yay for random pairings! ^^ I never thought of Joey/Mako. Very nice. ^^

I love random pairings!! Well written and very humorous

Oh my god, that was so cute! ...but no! No, no, no! I must look away! I'm a Seto-Jou fan, I'm a Seto-Jou fan, I'm a...::repeats constantly::

Aww, how cute! This pairing might have flown through my head once or twice, but this is the first time i've ever seen a fanfic for it. Well done!

Ok I'll have to admit I was skecptical when I saw the pairing, it seemed way too far fetched (and this is coming from a Seto/Jou fan!) but you pulled it off. This is really interesting and I hope you do continue. Another chapter would be great. I like how you're slowly developing his swimming abilities...well attempts at this point I suppose. Jounouchi learning how to swim in one go would have been unrealistic and pointless, but this is much better. But what you're going to learn at the end is that he already knew and was just using his 'fear of water' as an excuse to get close to Mako! *chuckles* Just kidding, this is awesome. I love your writing style, it's just so unique and creative! Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future! *glomps* *waves*
Later yo,

Icy

nice

random pairings are fun!

Hm? I thought that all puppies could swim by instinct. ~.^ A very original and fun idea for a fic. Plus, of course, in this time of year, mental images of a sunny beach are always welcome.

Definately not a pair you see everyday. ^_^ Random pairings are fun! Was this a one-shot or is there going to be more?? Hopefully the latter! ^_^

Aw... KAWAII! -Glomps-

Aw that's so adorable. Great job with this. I really enjoyed reading it! ^_^ So very cute. JoeyxMako I mean.. XD

Oh, do continue! That was very cute. I really like Mako. They should really give him more air time. (pouts) And no one ever thinks to put him in a fic! So yay, and write more!
Oh, and I loved when Joey finished Mako's thought sentence, made me smile =)