I really enjoyed this story. I do hope you'll continue along with it.

definatly a keeper i'm enjoying this a lot keep it going

In the immortal words of one Gar Logan from the TT show from the CN channel, "Dude, why'd you stop?!?!?!"
I mean, this was one hell of a story, sure it took me a while to find it, but once I started reading, I couldn't stop. Then, to realize that you haven't updated in over a year and a half was heart-shattering. Then to come to find out you haven't written anything in just as long was soul-breaking, come on what happened. You had some amazing talent for writing, so seriously, why'd you stop. If you can, please start up again, you have some major talent, don't let it go to waste.

NIce story thus far. i look forward to the next chapter.

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this story f* sucks its so dumb quit life

I have to agree with Kitty it went way to fast for a match up with nabiki.. you might want to slow it down a little bit and flesh out what is going on in the first chapter and the feelings nabiki has shown.. it may have been 3 years but but i am sure that she would still retain her Ice Queen ways with the way she thinks ranma left

but other than that great story keep it up and don't let anyone get to you about your spelling everyone is human and allowed to make mistakes even if you have a BA in english

I like the fact that Ranma & Akane are on friendly terms. The story line is ineresting, and I look forward to the next upcoming chapters.

Not bad... I like it, but I have to say they moved a bit to fast. They have only reunited and already Ranma had confess feelings of love for Nabiki in my honest opinion anyways.
Its great to see Akane marrying Ryoga. I like the pairings Akane/Ryoga or Ryoga /Ukyo. they seemed more realistic that way since they get along better. Great story please continue and update soon.

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This was a fun chapter, and we get to see Happosai get his butt kicked as well. Excellent! Looking forward to where Nabiki and Ranma's relationship goes, and see what happens next.

My guess is, given the line about Ayami being a funny surprise, is that she's maybe ten years old.

Not a bad story and an Akane/Ryougas pairing that is agreeable in my eyes. having Akane as his friend and not bashed around as some do sucks wind.
Either she should be a friend as in this story or as his love. And if the other sisters are involved then treat her as she should and not the stereo-typical mattlet bashing idiot. She is well protrayed here kudos to that!

As for the pairing of Ranma and Nabiki, I say either her or kasumi is all i can say!

dennisud

Let me get this straight: You have a BA in ENGLISH? My God, how is that even possible?

To start with, a spell checker is no substiture for proofreading. You used 'life’s' where you should have used 'lives', 'defiantly' instead of 'definitely', 'cloths' instead of 'clothes', and 'where' in place of 'were', and that's just in the first paragraph.

Likewise, your punctuation is abysmal. You use lots and lots of commas but they appear to be distributed at random. Your grammar approaches acceptability but your prose is decidely awkward, with no sense of rhythmn or flow. And how the heck did you manage to minor in psych without actually learning how to spell it?

Please let us know where you got your degree, because that's one school I want to prohibit my child from attending.

Nice start. You see a lot more stories where Ranma matures than those where the others in the cast do so as well. Given the personalities of all involved, I feel that Akane/Ryoga match up better than Akane/Ranma. Either Nabiki or Kasumi would be a better match for Ranma, the only issue was getting either of them interested. Time seems to have matured him, so a relationship would be possible.