I just read your story 'The Facts Machine' and was wondering what other stories you've written. I came across this, and I have to say it was very cute. I was worried for a moment, thinking that they were going to go after Draco, but you had them after Neville! I was shocked but pleased all the same. Neville was so adorable in this, and the end was awesome! _

Didn't expect the ending to be that, good job. I love stories with little twists at the end.

OH MY HOLY GOD! THAT WAS THE BEST ENDING! I LOVE YOU! *Throws kisses at screen*

Girly Ravenclaw cleverness.Yeah!

That was adorable. Always hoping to see Neville gain confidence and grow into himself. You had me wondering about the portrayal of the girls there for a bit-their cunning plan was a nice twist and you pulled it off very well. And the other girls taking notice of Neville gave hope that he will eventually find his own romantic happy ending.

im going to be kind, even though there was scarcly any D/g! It was okay :) lol no i loved it...how cute. And Neville could out model zoolander any day...back to my far-out pod! see yah there

That kickedbutt! I was about to stop reading cuz Hermione and Ginny were acting like such shallow bimbos. I'm not a Harry/Ginny -er but it was satisfying and it felt like the only was for ROn to admit that he liked Hermione was for her to have to take "drastic measures". lol! :)

Very funny and great to read! I especially liked the twist at the end - that's the stuff I live for! Keep it up!

hahahahahaha that's awesome! totally did not see that one coming! how cute! Hope to see a new chapter of Unbidden Desires up soon! :) Great job!

Wow, that's SOME twist there! *LOL* For a moment I thought it would be DRACO Hermione & Ginny would be fighting over with. But Neville? I wouldn't have guessed! *LOL* Entertaining read. Still reeling from shock at HG & GW fighting over NL, but it's good. _

omg, that was so cute, I can't believe it.

*sighs*

now go and update unbidden dessires!

*sighs again*

AWE! I LOVE YOU! THAT WAS EFFING AWSOME!

absolutely brill. high five.

Really liked this story. Good job!