|Reviews for GUN and their secret|
| Kyra The hedgehog 12/16/05 . chapter 4
Yeah, I'll use it. Please?
| BlueBelles 12/15/05 . chapter 5
Hi. You may remember me from Campfire Stories. I like this story so I reviewed for that and the question: Could you make a dancing avater for me? I read your rules and I don't join anti-clubs. Please e-mail me back, my e-mail is
P.S. it's shadow gurl with a u.
| ShadowandKnucklesgirlforever 5/16/05 . chapter 5
No fair Shadow is suppose to kiss me...
Yeah, Cel and Shadow? Shadow and Cel? I just can't connect it. If Maria is Cel, then Shadow only likes her for that reason right? Ugh! I'm confused right know and it's making my brain hurt!
Nice little story!
| Shadouge-lover-4eva 4/27/05 . chapter 5
Well, I guess it's a good story, but the fact that Celestial is connected to Maria is a bit strange because if she is a reincarnashion on Maria then Shadow should only like her as a friend. I'm not a huge fan of fan characters paired with charecters owned by Sega. I much prefer Shadouge stories. All round this is a lovely story.
| DeathBallerinaAmy 4/26/05 . chapter 5
_ aww celestial and shad kissed!
Thats so kute! _
| mad half hour 4/26/05 . chapter 5
lol, the ending is fine Golbez. No worries. Good job, though a few commas and apostraphese (spelled wrong for sure!) were missing. Other than that, it was fine. Kudos Golbez!
| Darkhymns 4/26/05 . chapter 5
Cute little ending. I felt there should be more, like it's undone, but the brain is very mean, isn't it? Overall, this was a nice little story. Great work. :D
| Narisha-is-here 4/25/05 . chapter 5
I all of a sudden have the urge to draw Shadow and Celestial kissing
| Sky's Penname 4/25/05 . chapter 5
I'm pretty sure that Sky is yours! Just because its red andhas my name doesnt mean its mine! Besides... Sky IS an awesome name! Good work with that! The ending was CUTE! It was a little short but oh well! Good job! MUHAHAHAHA! oh and tottally off subject... How did you get Maria's voice? I got everything on Sonic Adventure 2 except that! Darn you! Okay sorry for bringin that up! Good job again see ya!
| Darkhymns 4/8/05 . chapter 4
So Celestial is Maria? O.o That would be interesting, or she's just connected to her somehow. Hope to see the next chapter soon. :)
| ShadowandKnucklesgirlforever 4/7/05 . chapter 2
It is me (again) I forgot to tell you I saw you art page or whatever. It was good! Great actually! Umm...check some of my art went I post some...lol. Yea...promise me!
With more love,
| ShadowandKnucklesgirlforever 4/7/05 . chapter 1
Hiya! It's me! Why haven't you been reviewing my story? lol. Just kidding. I thought I might just review one of you lastest works since I haven't been doing much of anything on Anyway, since this IS a reveiw let me get to it.
Ok, this is really good. (I know it's the first chapter, but I read them all.) Nice plot and Most of the characters seem to be theirselves.
I will give you more praise in a minute. Okay I did however see some grammical mistakes that you might want to edit. Here is what I do: I use you're exact mistake and then I will correct it. Here we go! (This is NOT a flame or critizm!)I can't spell either so don't laugh. lol!
"Watch me." Mascara said in a 'I totally owned you' way.
Note: Any sentence like this you have to fix. Ok, when ever you have a sentence with a period(declaritive or imperitive) FOLLOWED BY said so and so. In the quoation marks, instead of a period you need a comma.
"Watch me," Mascara said in a 'I totally owned you' way.
"Sounds like we have company." He muttered and went outside, the others soon followed.
Note: Ok, I sorta had to change this to get my point across. You never capitilize he or she (pronoun) if it is used AFTER the statement being made.
"Sounds like we have company," he muttered and went outside, the others soon followed.
This rule also used if it said: he exclaimed, questioned, said, etc...
It wasn't really just a normal building, here where Rouge lived and rumored that Shadow also resided there. Its lights off for the day as they only came on at night. Club Rouge could be read easily enough. For as obvious as it was, it made the perfect
hide out sometimes. I mean why would Rouge be in club Rouge?
Note: I am not sure if it is the program you are using or a mistake. Either way I think that should be fixed.
Ok that is it! I'm not trying to critize you in any kind of way. I just want to help so you won't get any flames. Keep up the excellent work!
| DeathBallerinaAmy 3/29/05 . chapter 4
haha! You lost readers!
| an enbers shadow 3/29/05 . chapter 4
up date soon. i loved it
| mad half hour 3/29/05 . chapter 4
I don't see why people do that either. They just kinda stop reading...O_o :shrugs: You're still a good author. They're just losing out. Keep it up, and Good luck!