This is a nice liitle fic. Heh, and it does sound like somthing Johnny would try. I wonder what Edgar would decide? It seems really obvious but the more I think about it, the more complicated it gets.

And yes, Vargas is so very, very good.

Lovely fic. Poor Johnny, he just wants to be happy and normal. Too bad no one's ever gonna let that happen to him! XD And don't worry, I've read Vargas-one of the greatest things I've read in my LIFE.

See, now that's a plan! I can see it now!

Nny: ...gah, my head... *sits up*
Edgar: oh, god, Nny, are you okay?
Nny: ...who the hell are you?

O_O oh dear. 'This is quite a pointless pastime'. And there's Scriabin, in all his pessimistic nature. Actually, there are quite a few spelling mistakes here and there. "Is this your low-tech version of Forget It?" Haha. No, really, that's funny. "Stuff his body in a dumpster." Honestly, Scri, that's not helping. Aw he...remembers. Oops. Oh well; it wouldn't have worked out anyway. Edgar would need to tell him at some point.

Hmm.. What would Edgar have done.. Probably told him the truth.. Minus some greusome details.. But... Hehe, Scri's so kawaii and angsty, but ya gotta love him.. Mostly. Vargas is a bloodly awesome story! Now I always see Edgar with his scars.. Damn you Zarla, damn you! N'eho, is Forget It a real movie or something made to make the story flow..? -ponders-
I love Nny's mood swings, really I do. Makes him easier to ... Something. -Smiles- Later! Off to read more of I'm Going To Kill You!

-Kit

I have to tell you this is one of the rare JTHM fanfictions that is not horribuly out of character or just plain stupid. Keep up the good work. And I'm so glad your spellin is better than mine.

Better late than never, but I just watched Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind recently. Nice meshing with Memento and the question of whether identity=memory. And a classic depiction of Scriabin, too...though I agree with Scri, I'm curious to see what Edgar *would* have done, if Johnny didn't remember.

I'm also hoping you have email alerts turned on: Crow may have mentioned that someone is getting together a site for Zeitgeist, and that someone would be me. I'd love to get you in on things--I'm rueyeet at AOL too if you'd like to contact me!

GAZAH I am terrible at reviewing things. I'm sorry this is a million years late. Arggh

ANYWAY I really liked this a lot. Perhaps I'm not exactly unbiased here but STILL. It's an interesting idea that you pulled off well. Is the movie in this based off of a real movie? Cause I swear I've seen a movie along those lines (that I think wasn't Memento but I can't remember) and I'm not sure if I just made it up or it actually happened. Haha, that's ironic.

Darn it I am so bad at these.

I enjoy this story very much. I Hope to read more of your stories.

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Holy pigshit, that was good. And that's a good question, too, though we all know wich choice Edgar really would prefer (heehee). Um...Vargas rawks. Yeah. Carry on! *skips off*