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Paradoxos
2007-02-04 . chapter 1
Ugh! I love this one shot! By the way, this is my second time reading... LOL.

I love how you connected Yuri, Alice, Kurando and Anastasia in here. And about the Hyuga thing. That's just soo awesome. Maybe I'm just a sucker for romance.

Anyways, GOOD JOB!
silver thorns
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
i like the idea with the whole 'only one' thing. it's...nice. too nice to be real T^T. wish it weren't...

still, very well written and stuff, and nice, and quiet, and...yeah. i was really surprised when i saw the ending. i mean, i knew anastasia liked kurando (it WAS obvious...you'd have to be a mole to not see it...even YURI did!) but i never thought he'd be so happy with her. it was nice (just finished it, you see. first time playing it, and it was AWESOME!) so yeah. well done! i'd say more, but i can't really think about it. i'm a newbie to this pairing. kurando was MINE, but i don't want anastasia to set her photos on me.
CazzaCat
2005-08-15 . chapter 1
Hey my name is cazza and i have to say that your fic, although puffy has some real potential. Maybe you should try and write another chapter. I have one online called Too Close To Tell You. I hope you get a chance to read it.
:-) Tee Hee
;-) Signed The Cat
moshimochi
2005-06-29 . chapter 1
cute couple^^
kingleby
2005-05-14 . chapter 1
that was beautiful! seriously, you write so well! and i loved the idea of the hyuga only loving once, its so cute ^_^ the leave thing that kurando did was great, it helped to show he has the same type of senses Yuri seems to have. loved it!
MusicalDragons
2005-03-21 . chapter 1
I would love to add you as a friend. You inspired me to write my own KurAna Fic. Would you mind if I added you as a fave author? My story should be up in a day or two if you want to check it out :)
Anime-Alee
2005-02-22 . chapter 1
hi Puffy-chan, I really like this one. I also put you on my Fav. authors list, and remeber when you answered my questions about the game, and I'd love to know what happens to Karin. If you wouldn't mind telling me. Thanx,
Tiger5913
2005-02-08 . chapter 1
Waah! This was so beautiful!! *_* Thank you for such a great gift! *is in tears* And my goodness, girl, how in the world could you ever possibly disgrace me? Silly, you got their personalities down pat! I absolutely loved Anastasia's insight on Yuri and Karin's lack of relationship, and her curiosity about Yuri's beloved Alice. I only found one small error: Yuri and Kurando discovered their family relation before Immortal Mountain, not after. They fought Saki when they first went to Inugami Village, and then after she woke up and revealed that Yuri's father was her brother, the group headed out for Immortal Mountain to track Nicolai down. But other than that, everything was perfect, and I love you so. ^_^ And eek, I know what you mean about the Japanese culture thing, but no worries, you wrote "aishiteru" correctly. But as for Kurando referring to Anastasia as "Hime", I think it would be "Anastasia-Hime" for "Princess Anastasia." Me, I take the easy way out and just have him call her "Lady Anastasia" the way he does in the game. Hell, don't worry about it - I'm just babbling and nitpicking, so ignore me. Heh, I guess now you see why I had some trouble with TBH in the beginning due to the Japanese culture worries, eh? ^.^0 Oh, and btw, "his princess", eh? Ooh, Kurando is possessive! *giggles* Oh, Puffy, please write more KurAna fics. Even a lemon, if you will! I humbly offer you my assistance if you'd like it. ^_^ Well then, this review is getting really long, and I need to go read the last few parts of your Yuri x Alice fic, so I'll be off! I got me a new fic up too, whenever you get a chance to read. ^_^ Oh, I can't wait for your next KurAna fic... :D And now, I shall leave you with a cute little epilogue scene!

Anastasia: *once outside Saki's house* Um, Yuri, what does "aishiteru" mean?
Yuri: Uh, I think it's Japanese for "I love you."
Anastasia: *gasp* R-really?? *faints*
Kurando: Lady Anastasia! *dashes over and catches her in his arms*
Everyone else: ... *stares at Yuri*
Yuri: *baffled* ...What'd I do?!
Bella
2005-02-08 . chapter 1
A beautifully written story; you managed to put me through about seven different emotions! I agree with the Hyuga trait, and it doesn't seem contrived at all!
Of course, historically, Anastasia didn't survive the revolution, but I get the feeling in the SH universe, she ends up living in Inugami Village with Kurando ^__^
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