I really like this story, I think you write the characters very well, I hope you continue soon! _

Hope you update soon this is really good!

Well I just read your story and must say that I really enjoyed it.

I hope that you continue this story, but seeing as it hasn't been updated in so long I feel that maybe it won't be. A little disappointing as this story is really really good and deserves to be finished.

Anyway, I hope to see an update in the near future :)

I LOVE YOUR STORY TO BITS! dont stop writing please!

cute! Love the reaction between the two! More soon please!

please continue! this is quite an interesting twist on The Mummy but I am throughly enjoying it!

if you don't write I will make sure to hunt you down until you finish this story! Alright too threaten don't call the cops, I'm just saying your story rocks and I NEED a new chapter

Hey, this is really good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

You rock! I love this story!

Hi, well this time I'm a little bit late for the review (kinda lot of late, but I blame it on the fact that I was awfully sick).

On the bright side, this chapter really make me laugh, it was definitely fun. It was so easy to imagine the escenes, maybe cause it reminds a you a lot to the escene on the first movie where Rick is trying to get Evy out of Egipt, and she just ignore all his attempts :-)

Short, yes but it made up with the funny parts. Great work, I enjoy your story and hope to see more of it.

*purrs* ah, comic misunderstandings. How lovely. That, and chocolates and a flight jacket...m

ohh Don't stop there! Poor Evy, she was just trying to help him! Well, I hope Rick makes up for his rudeness, and they make out or sumthing! Lol!

Well, Update soon PLEASE!

lotta love!

Lilylynn

i have a mental image of Rick O'Connell in a nice pair of Levi's...yowr.

Nice chapter!

Definetely loving the banter between those two :).

Jonahatan as a worried brother, was indeed an interesting change that make the character act a little more mature than what he's usually portrayed. Also a very good thing, 'cause you are not making him completely different from the original character.

As I said before, very nive chapter, it was light and fun...good way to introduce us to the whole Eve&Rick relationship.

o cliffhanger... update SOON!