It's very much David's "voice," but if you hadn't *warned* it was incest, I might never have known. David should have named Nate, or at least said "brother."

PLEASE oh please write more :D!

...wait, that's it? who was comforting dave? i wish this was more fleshed out.

you should post more of this soon.
i think you're talented enough to handle it. ;)

dude that was too short, where is the rest? i'm expecting this big, shcoking, THING and i get...two paragraphs.

? More?

short, but you have a nice writing style. I like your phrasing and sentence length etc. It makes an impact. Yay for slash! (incest ek, but i'll forgive you because you write really well!) good work kiddo :)

An original idea, I'd like 2 see more!