 HarryandDracoSlash 9/25/11 . chapter 4when you uploading its realllyyyy goood! |
 Vegas Chick 8/14/06 . chapter 4WHAT...WHAT... HOW COULD U END THE STORY LIKE THAT? WHAT! THAT WAS JUST WRONG! THE STORY SHOULD HAVE BEEN ANOTHER WAY! LOL! I WANTED IT TO END BUT WITH THE RIGHT ENDING! LOL THIS WAS JUST CRUEL! LOL
TINA |
 Legolas 3/14/05 . chapter 4 I soo...dislike you for that. how can you possible end a chapter like that. Leave me here to wonder what going to happen next. *sighs* Post next chapter soon please. This is getting very interesting. I was hoping that someone would stop those two from getting married. Think the whole thing should be called of. You know it would be kind of cool if this happend to turn out to be one of harry's dreams he has and when he wakes up he decided to go find Draco, or the other way around this could be draco's never ending till now nightmare and he just now wake up and he decides that he should go find harry be fore it's to late. Just a though and all. Hope you update soon.
Peace |
 anon 6/2/04 . chapter 4 I want more... |
 martin the alien 6/30/03 . chapter 4 A CLIFFIE? How COULD you? You're EVIL! |
 Neofelis 4/5/03 . chapter 1 stunning concept.
very well written - you might like to edit the many spelling mistakes though.
You've really done the charaters well, the ceremony was also very well worded - the perspectives are great - realistic interactions.
I do like the irony that Harry's never had a female lover before. The use of Sirius and Lupin is also very clever.
The age and date line is perhaps a little scary - but it does make a certain sense.
And i'll agree the use of cameos is very good - the fact that it's quite a few years after school means that there should be new characters anyway, you've done it well, and you're style is different enough that it doesn't seem wrong.
Good cuts between chapters.
When i first read the title and blurb - i was a little scared, but when i got into it i was pleasantly surprised. Good stuff. |
 Mouse Misfit 2/16/03 . chapter 4 Who the hell is Simon. I thought Draco was going to object, and don't they usually say does anyone object before they pledge to each other. It's really nicely written though. |
 bittersweetKandy 1/18/03 . chapter 4Ooh ooh ooh! So much suspense! Please post up the next chapter soon; I don't know what's going to happen and it's killing me! Plse plse plse plse finish this story!
bittersw33t |
 J. Lynn 2/9/02 . chapter 4more, more, more please? |
 coke fiend 12/23/01 . chapter 4You must finish! *beats Harry with broom* Go with Draco! Go! Leave Ginny, you lying little...*ahem* |
 Alhendra 12/23/01 . chapter 4Well at the end of chapter 3 (Wedding Part 2) I was stunned with how u ended it...(how d hell DID u manage 2 come up with that one?) and now finally we get the objections! Plz let Harry and Draco end up together again! |
 Michele Lupin 12/2/01 . chapter 4 NOOOO how can u leave us hanging. I am dieing here. - PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. |
 angelusgrl 11/29/01 . chapter 4 hurry and finish i want to read more. |
 Ke Malfoy 11/29/01 . chapter 4Oh my god.. I'm hiperventilating.. god... how-did-you-dare to stop at that point? do you wanna me to die? Please, write soon and if you can, write me an email () telling about the update. |
 watkins's angel 11/29/01 . chapter 4 wow great story! hurry up and write some more :) it was fantastic so far! |