lovely, written with pure talent. nicely done.

Ooh I really liked this story a lot! Good work.

Wow... just... wow.
I wish I had writing talent ;-;

your characterization on them was SO GOOd! i really like it!

That was really beautifull.

So sad. So sweet. (sob) i needed a fic like that. i love it. and it's style. i love QuixSei fics. i just do. more, alright? please?

wow...

Wow...great story, Malice...can really feel that Quistis is upset over the loss of her Instructor's License. Keep it up!

Whoa! I never knew that Quistis could have such a sharp tongue! She really let Seifer have it, didn't she? :^) Also, I like how you worked the angle of the training session from Seifer's point of view. I often wondered where he was while Squall was inside the Infirmary.
More great work, Malice. You've turned me into a real fan of your stories. :^)

Aww...that was sooo sweet!

I love this one too! I love all of your stories! They are the best. You are the best writer ever! Its the sweetest story out!

Hey! Why don't you conclude this? Like for example, you can type about after the game? And how much their hearts grew fonder for eachother? Well, just an idea.

*applauds* Excellent, excellent work. Great portrayal of Seifer, but an even better portrayal of Quistis. ^_^

aww yeah, cali girl, you switched protagonists on me! there was no way you could focus on Quistis' grief and accentuate Seifer's selfishness at the same time unless you reconciled the two characters. brilliant solution, malice. magnfico! (i made that word up)

I love it! *sniff* Oh what the heck! *waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh**sniff**sniff* Now that I got out of my system, I do have to say that.......I LOVE your work!