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| Lalaith Yamainu 2008-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseNeeds to be refortmatted for paragraph breaks, but I'm glad to have found this here. |
| 'Life-so-unnecessary' 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abusewonderful you portrayed the emotion in that letter really well |
| 14hp1 2008-05-12 ch 4, | abuseWOW. That was one of the best fics I've read on this site, one minute your laughing histerically, the next your nearly crying. VERY WELL DONE! |
| 14hp1 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseVERY FACINATING. I love this story. That is all because I must read on! |
| 14hp1 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good! A bit of advice: You need to double space or something because the words all jumpled up strain the readers eyes and make it hard to read and easy to lose your spot. |
| CrayonsPink 2008-03-30 ch 4, | abuseI LOVED this story, it was heart-warming! Great job! |
| BlackRoseFire 2008-03-12 ch 4, | abuseThat was really a good story. |
| hypercell 2008-02-26 ch 4, | abuseI have to say this is the best time fic I have read. ever. It is really good, and really sad. I am Glad to see how Peter felt and I love how you captured every moment perfectlyl; The Feelings, adn the actions. Really good. Love it. |
| hypercell 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWas this written before or after OotP? Who is DADA teacher? |
| Musafreen 2007-12-27 ch 2, | abuseOh, good. You didn't ignore Peter. Well-written. |
| The Aquatic Chewbacca 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abusethis story is awesome. and so sad, too. i loved how things turned out, though i would have been happier with a happy/semi-happy ending. -tac |
| RandomTopic 2007-11-19 ch 4, | abuseYeah, serves him right, Peter. Although, I agree with you; he's very pitiful (which is slightly different than sympathy). Good fic. Sad ending, but heartfelt. |
| Joe King 2007-07-24 ch 4, | abuseThat was excellent...absolutely excellent! I would love to see Snape with blonde hair! I am assuming, from the way you used your bible verses, you are a Christian, please forgive me if I'm wrong. But if you are, and even if you aren't, I love the way you use the bible in your stories. I won't say anything else in case you aren't a Christian, I don't want to offend you overly much. Again, if I guessed wrong, I'm sorry. If not, use your talent for the Lord and continue to witness in ways like this and larger. A Christian friend and fan, God bless, JK |
| Mrs.Hermione Jane Weasley 2007-07-23 ch 4, | abuseOh, I love the story. It's so sweet, even Wormtail. I feel so sorry for Harry. It's got ot be quite hard to never now your parents and the meet your dead dad when your fifteen-years-old and he's the same age! Creepy! |
| jadestar5 2007-07-22 ch 4, | abuseluv it !! is it finished?? |