Wow !

I've read your story this afternoon, and I needed a few time to recover. It was just like I had something stuck in my stomach. I couldn't do anything else thinking again and again to James Sirius, Remus and Peter and Harry ; and how it could have been different, or more exactly " how it could not have been different".

In a certain way, it is horrible to see the things from this point of view, more that the horror of the situation, it gives the dimension of fatality and powerlessness...

But I must also say, that at the beginning, I couldn't help laughing, every line, to such an extent that I had to stop reading

So I can only congratulate you for your writing and thank you for the wonderful moment you offer me, while I read it. Thanks, really ! )

Wonderful story!

This is great and so sob inducing I couldn't stop crying for most of this chapter because well I can relate to Harry because in away I too am with out a father. And I'm sure 'Nocturne' playing in the background didn't help. Though this is wonderfully written and a fun read.

Truly amazing story! I was holding back tears at the part with the letters. God, I'm still holding them back now! And I'm not a very sentimental person!

Can I have two Pan-Galactic Gargle Blasters? There's nothing worse than having one drunk head.

I really enjoyed the story... and the reference. Gotta love a good switch-up from the norm. Good work.

Nice! I love how you slipped in that little bit about the Somebody Else's Problem charm from Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy!

This was a really original fic. I've never seen one where they jump forward in time (and I'm addicted to fics, so trust me, I've seen a LOT). I like what you did with the letters and Peter's perspective. You did a really good job!

This was really funny. James WAS a seeker. Poor Peter.

Normally I do not stop to comment, I dont usually have the time, but I'm waiting for the release of the new Harry Potter website, I have the time. Plenty of it. i liked the story overall. It was different than the others I've read and the overall count of fan fiction is just too many to count.I hated the spacing but the story was excellent. I very much enjoyed reading it and the only thing I would change is the spacing. My favorite parts were the end letters and Wormtails grief.

Brilliant. I'm glad you didn't extend the story, and if there was a way, it was this way.

wow. the best harry potter fan fic ever.

Wow! That. Was. AMAZING!

Yeah and I know! I actually felt... Sad for Peter!

Peter! Peter pettegrew of all the ppl!

I think the letters at the end did me in, especially the one from James. This was fantastic. I love the insight of the characters and the caring they showed. I love that this all came together and was an awesome travel in time fic. This was truly fantastic, thank you for it!

Wow, this is brilliant, you are such a great writer! I enjoyed this story alot, everything fit together perfectly, it was so clever. Great Job :)

It was simply AWESOME! Short and sweet, and really well played. I liked that James was exactly as I imagined he would be - fun, but not immature, intelligent, but not ridiculously so, and brave, but newfound rather than foolish pretty words. Thank you for a truly good fanfic.