 Mistyrious One 12/12/09 . chapter 1see- this is why you're supposed to listen to the doctor- uh, healer... |
 nobody 9/25/09 . chapter 1 it was pretty good but Aly was WAY OOC. She's smarter than that. and i don't think she would scream like that either, yes labor is painfull (not that i no but still) but aly just doesnt seem like the kind of person who would do that. |
 snow and the sea 12/20/07 . chapter 1Aww...sweet! She named him after her Pa. Ok. |
 Tortall Tribe Freak 5/18/07 . chapter 1this is so good plz write more |
 linen-and-curls 2/24/07 . chapter 1sweet. you should continue. i love fluff, but this was fluff of a different kind. i enjoyed this, it made my day smiley! |
 fum lum llama 7/20/06 . chapter 1 why did u do only 1 chapter it is to good to end! |
 Mrs. Dom Masbolle 7/11/06 . chapter 1aww...this was cute. |
 Catri Howlman-Carthaki spy 12/8/05 . chapter 1that was acually funny.
she should have got somebody to do it for her.
but this rocked. |
 happilyinsane13 6/28/05 . chapter 1I think you should continue its so good! I really like it. Although, George and Fesgao are gonna scold her good! Not to mention how her brothers and Numair are gonna react? Her mother, her godparents the King and Queen, Daine? *raises eyebrows* see what i mean? loved it! |
 Silverchild of the winds 2/11/05 . chapter 1Ah. so sweet |
 BlackRobedMagelet 2/10/05 . chapter 1Wonderful... Aly seems like the type of gal to go against doctor's orders (kinda like me with my sprained ankle... off subject) I am writing about Aly kids, one is George by the way. Keep up the good work on other fics. |
 Dragonfly-09 2/9/05 . chapter 1pleez make more chapters? |
 jollyrancher-j2k i swear one day i will remeber what log in means 2/9/05 . chapter 1 aw... how cute... bad aly though for sneaking out... |
 Queen of the Nymphs 2/8/05 . chapter 1NO! Why'd you have to make it a one shot? |
 Jennyvre Moss 2/8/05 . chapter 1nice little fic...a bit of AN fluff would be good :D ...but otherwise very good |