that is so cute

Me again. I reviewed this story on hmfarm under the name of Miss Popuri. I'm gonna say the same thing. Your stories rock. and that's nothing but the truth. You make them so real especially this one. It rocks and I hope you write more. I also would like to ask this: If you could find the time, could you read my stories?

I read this on HM Farm too, and I loved it! Great fic, one of my all time favorites! )

What the hell? What the heck is this melodramatic soap-opera? Where's the WAFF?

Mugs: I read this fic on Hmfarm in like grade 7 (I think) and I'm in grade 9 now so yeah... ;
Ron: NEways! claps hands together
Mugs: Yes well from what I DO remember this fan fic was THE greatest I would've added it too my favs but I can't. V-V
Ron: No space?
Mugs: None.
Ron: pats Mugs back
Mugs: The neding was sweet you EVEN made me like Elli in this fic! I'm not really an Elli fan I don't find her all THAT! laughs nervously Yes well I me and my friend.
Ron: smiles
Mugs: Not you Ron. -_-;
Ron: (
Mugs: Me and my friend Lauren got really pissed off when I was reading it TOO her (she really seems too like me to act out fan fic too her ;) when Ann gave up hers and Jacks baby for adoption that REALLY pissed us off like REALLY pissed us off but after a while we've cooled down but STILL! Anywho I just had too review and say this was a really fantastic fic too read and I really enjoyed it but I personally felt sorry for Popura even though in the end she acted sort of like a bitch! But it's ALL good!
Ron: Can I say ANYTHING in this review?
Mugs: You just did.
Ron: -"
Mugs: Anywho write another fic soon! Keep up the fantastic work! Really loved the fic! Peace Out! _V
Ron: asleep
Mugs: asleep
Ron: ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ ZZ...

heY! gOoD sToRy...BuT u MaDe KaReN sOuNd DeSpArAtE aNd MeNtAl aNd ShEs ThE oPpOsItE...aNd ThE sToRy Is SoOo SaD aNd YoU mAdE JaCk SoUnD lIkE a SoFtIe AnD vErY eMoTiOnAl...hE tOuChInG tHo..VeRy ToUcHiNg! MaKeS mE wAnNa CrY

Wow, that had me held all the way through it! Evidently the drag wasn't so bad, otherwise I wouldn't have kept on reading. Plus, Jack ended up with Elli(she's my favourite girl after Ann)!

Hitoki: DIE KAREN, KILL KAREN, DIE DIE DIE DIE

...Ignore my friend, she's hyper. This was brilliant, tell me when you write more like this!

*****-5 stars- Excellent!

-Cricket

yahooo!Popuri dies

Hi Gamergirl87! It's Puppy (Harvest Dreamland), your affiliate. :)) Well anyways nice drama story there! :Sniff: It's sad how Popuri died but glad that Elli and Jack had a happy ending. Karen would make a good star in the story and she is the best! But still, even without Karen, it's okay. Kinda weird about Ann, but it's still great. You are a very nice story writer and you should publish this someday. *OOh going too far there .;;* Well see you! And your other fics are cool too.

i loved this book email me and tell me what the new one is called

This is worse than having to watch those stupid soaps on NBC with my sister because my TV's at the shop. It's good, but it left suds in my mouth. What did you do, watch and tape a whole month's worth of soaps for research?

o goody

very good...bad grammar...just a bit...but very very good )

I thought this story was great! I actually read all 13 chapters! (something i never do, lol) Anyway, when you make another story, then tell me. I'll be waiting to read it.

wow! kawaii!kawaii!kawaii!kawaii!kawaii!kawaii!kawaii!kawaii!kawaii! im such a suckr for romance!