Wow, nice story. I like it... ^^

i like your approach...

Hm...

This was an interesting story, if a bit depressing. Poor Kiba. He's all alone in the world. It was well written. Keep writing.

yay great update. keep up the good work and update soon

Keep writing! Have I told you I love this story? It's very, very well done, albeit a little confusing at times. One of my favorites.

Really cool.
keep up the good work

*Ryu the flamed fur wolf was here;)*

Oh, cliff hanger! Well this was a lovely chapter. I liked the beginning with Kiba, the "lake scene" and the Blue x Hige scene. Oh and Cheza dreaming of the wolves for some reason that made me happy. Especailly the petting part. ~_-
There were some unspaced words and maybe so grammarical errors but nothing major that it distracts from the story.
There seems to be a lot of emphasis on feelings, not a bad thing just something I noticed.

"If he had been human he may have dwelt on the thought, wondering why it was like that. Perhaps even pondering if the song was really just for him, or how he knew her so very well, so that every sense of him knew exactly where she was. But he was a wolf, and he was not weighted down by human doubts. He had his truth and his instinct.."

And that's that.
By the way, I thought Emma (Cheza) was her name not Amelia Starr or is "Emma" a nickname and Cheza an futher nickname. Girl's got so many nicknames...
I enjoyed it (even though I should be in bed; it's almost 2 in the morning!) I won't tell you to update cos I know you will. ^_^

Excellent fanfic. Hope you get the next one out soon^^

your story is really good i hope you write more!

Wow, that was good. I liked the way you brought them back, but added a nice touch by not giving them their full memories, so they have to "rediscover" themselves. Your story is well-paced and obviously well-thought out, but I did notice a couple of spelling and punctuation errors. It's not that big a deal, since your story's so awesome, but remember to look out for them, all the same... Good job!

Did I mention I LOVEE you? Your story is WONDERFUL. Maybe some typos..don't remember. Loved how they all followed Tsume to her house..ha...
And ..what Emma said "Blue whatever happens you're as much a wolf as anyone else. And even if not, you're twic as good in the other way." I LOVED that...very MEANINGFUL to ME.
I like the patting too...And the "blooming golden flower in her heart as...a quiet voice singing inside her" was WONDERFUL.
Oh, and is the co-worker of Emma's important?
I LOVE this story and I LOVE you for writing it.
Kay I'll stop raving and do some work now.
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it! Happy Days!! ^_^
Oh, what exactly did your twin say to inspired the title? Loved it by the way.
^_^

Did I mention I love this story?
I loved Blue and Hige's meeting...Tehe...And they're all wonderfully in character yet themselves. During the Tsume / Roger conversation some of it was hard to tell who was talking, just to let you know.
good and amusing.

This is really good! You have a way with words, and the story idea is very different and interesting. The only thing I would say you need to watch is grammar and typos and stuff like that (there were a couple words I think sounded funny . . . "acceptation" of the offer?) But other than that it's great! Just one more thing - WHERE'S KIBA? He's coming, right? It just seems like something's missing without him.

I love this story, but I especially love how you described Hige's name--

"The name had rolled in her head fluidly, reminding her of sunlight."

That's always how Hige's name feels to me. To me, different names have different feelings. This story shows that.

Congrats for writing such a lovely, thought-provoking fic.

I was going to wait until more reviews can up but I just can't!
This is good. It's so well written. Though I think there are some typos like "wised" for "wished", etc but other than that quite readable.
Very good. Interesting and reable.
I like your characters. There is obvious a Wolf's Rain connection (duh, it's under Wolf's Rain and two had nicknames from WR) but they're also themselves..Whoa, did that make any sense?
Also, how did you pick the names? They all seem so random (which is good) but why did you pick what names you did?
And all we have left to meet is Kiba, right? If my guesses about the others (Hige and Toboe, really) are correct. ^_^
Very good (sick of that yet?) Well written as always. I love your writing; I always get so involed. It's was like reading a real story. ^_^
Yay! Good.