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Kurt Baros aka The Falcon
2007-08-25
ch 13,
abusegood stori i cant wait for more
Otritzi
2006-05-06
ch 13,
abuseExcellent finisher to Sau Phron. That was almost as potent as some of the other stories describe the finishing blow, his own arrogance turned against him, almost poetic, really. The last chapter left something to be desired, after all, it's only a few hundred words, I was expecting a little more.

Please either continue this or something, it's a good story.
Tigger-69
2005-05-16
ch 13,
abuseCompletely unexpected and utterly brilliant. This author has a wonderful imagination that can use the very core of the Ranma universe and twist it so that it still exists but it a complete new and original way.

The Ranma is now in an alternative universe and the 2 families are slightly different and completely enthralling. All the main characters are included but are not as you remember.

I cannot praised this story enough. If you are a purist Ranma fan look elsewhere. BUT if you enjoy a thrilling tale read it any way.

I now this book is closed but I would love to read more of the life and Experiences of this Ranma and Nabiki story. Thank you for writing such great stories.
Kitsune6
2005-04-23
ch 13,
abuseYay for RxN! Great writing. Sorry, I have nothing constructive since the story is fine as it is.
SSJ Guyver1
2005-04-20
ch 13,
abuseI have to admit,... I was a bit apprehensive about reading this story.

However, when I had read EVERYTHING on the N&R website, I found myself lingering over this story.

Finally reading it, I must admit that it was VERY well done, and you should continue writing ^^

Maybe a sequel?
Rubel
2005-03-12
ch 13,
abuseNeat, I like the Blade Runner feel of the story. I like how it goes and all the characters are still themselves even in a different setting. The only question I have is, where's Ryouga? Pardon the joke. Thanks for the good read.
Queenmunchkin
2005-02-19
ch 13,
abuseso what happens now or it that the end of the story?
Love your crazy cyber stalker X
P.S. the phone call came from inside the house
malichite
2005-02-15
ch 13, anon.
abuseWow, really liked this story quite a bit. Looks to be set in a world somewhat like either 5th Element, with a bit of Judge Dread. Really like the R/N pairing, as they are one of my favorite pairs. Can't wait to see more works by you. Think your quite good with what you've done so far. A good pace you set with your stories as well, though if you really wanted to make a story epic, you could. Especially with the plot of this story, it could have easily been epic, it just would have to have been a good 3mb bigger. It was short, almost too short, but it flowed together nicely.

Looking forward to future works.
Good luck and keep writing

Malichite
PS. More R/N matchups
Quamzin Kravshera
2005-02-14
ch 2,
abusehey! how come most of the chapters do not exist?
pspinler
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseI've neglected to review until now, but only because I was so damn wrapped up in this story.

Very, very well done. I'm incredibly impressed, and the speed you write at amazes me.

I had thought that the story would wind itself up at the recuse of Akane, but apparently you have yet more planned. I look forward to it with great anticipation!

Thanks!
-- Pat
griffenvamp
2005-02-14
ch 13, anon.
abusewheres ranma's mom
imortis
2005-02-13
ch 13,
abuseis from heavens hand done? you do still have two other X-Com games to try out.

imortis

P.S. I like this story, hard rain, continue it.
Wonderbee31
2005-02-13
ch 13,
abuseShort, but fun. Nice to see Ranma still get off put by Nabiki, and that she likes to tease him a lot still. They work really well together, and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Wonderbee31
2005-02-13
ch 12,
abuseHmm, loks like things are going to get pretty hot for Ranma now, too bad. I hope that things will work out for him and Naabiki, and that maybe there's a happy ending in the cards.
Chi Vayne
2005-02-12
ch 13, anon.
abuseNice story. I have to admit the confrontation between Ranma and Higurashi reminded me of the scene in the Princess Bride between Inigo Montoya and Count Rugen ("Offer me everything I ask for."
"Anything you want"
"I want my father back" and kills him)
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