Good story! Short, sweet and to the point! Not something I normally read might you know, but this satisfied me quite a bit! I enjoyed reading. I hope to write my own Harvest Moon Magical Melody story so keep checking!Favs*

I liked this story a lot. I think it's good in places but some parts happen too fast and it isn't desriptive enough. Overall I enjoyed it!

Finally! I found someone who agreeds that Jack wakes up too early! It is kind of was a little too dramtic in some parts, but it still was enough to keep me interested. It reminds me a bit of Save the Homeland.

I think it would have been better if the ring was a blue feather, but diamonds are nice too. Winter 10 is my birthday on that game!

BO-ring!

I could've sworn I read this somewhere before!

Have you posted this on another site? I'm pretty sure I've read it before...
Anyway, I really like this story )

Um... well, it's... ok... I guess. I, personally, don't like it all. But that's just my opinion. Looking at facts, I guess it's passable... You could have put in more description, and the sentance structure was a little off. There wasn't really much of a plot until the end, when it was all rushed. It loses the pace. If I were to rate this I'd give it three out of ten (no hard feelings, maybe some of your other fanfiction is better).

really cool story! (two thumbs up) keep writning :D !

this was sooooooooo great! it brought tears to my eyes in in the middle. write more

Good story, bad ending. If they were going to make a farm in the city why didn't they stay at Mineral Village in the first place?

That was great. Write more!

That was very good! Though the language got a little shakespearish toward the end, and Ann's sumbmissive attitude might get you in the doghouse with women's libbers, but good job!

POINTLESS! BORING! I've got better things to do other than read stupid fanfiction that hasn't been edited. He left- and what? The game ENDS if you leave! I see you've obviously NEVER played Harvest Moon, and from your style of writing, you've yet to get out of Kindergarten. Re-write, please.

That was a great story! Please make more!

This fan fic is greatly written...very interesting ideas and stuff...ann's my fave so i was happy too!