It was a very short and sweet story. In some parts, Elli just doesn't sound like Elli and sounds a little rude. But other then that, it was great.

Go Elli! Yay! Nice job writing this, though there could have been more discriptions, this was really nice.

Rhia

Cool! Please continue!

You call this "fanfiction", I call this "cow poop". Boring, stupid, and Elli acts like a stupid snot. Try again, this time you need to round-file this idea and start over.

haha try to finish it i wanna see what happens

That was excellent please write more!

Nice...it cheered me up.

Ai, don't listen to him! I love this story. Actually, I prefer this type of story: Short little fluff that isn't a take on 'Jack taking over the farm'. Everyone writes those, and few succeed in making it entertaining...Well, I'm rambling, so I'll shut up now. _ Great fic!

GOOD! Write more!

this story bites.