Its a great story update soon!

HAHAHA!! LOLERS, DUDE, LOLERS!! MAn, I COULD SO SEE THIS HAPPENING!

((pouts)) Yaoi is not gross.

I'm impressed: you said "yin and yang." Most people screw up and say "ying." ^_^

Good fic, though Yami was a bit... embarrassing...

~ Umbrae

Live long. Live well. Write.

I'm sorry but...that was just weird. Good weird! But weird...

Heheh... I would imagine that Yami's confusion over being Pharoh would be immense. And amusingly annoying...poor Yugi...**grins**

Bakura = evil. Seems like he's out to get the Pharoh any way he can, even if it's so small a thing...Bad Bakura! **thwacks him soundly upside the head...then runs in fear and hides behind Ryou...and Yami...and Yugi...and Seto...and Marik...and Malik...and pretty much the entire cast of hotties...**

Hhaha! The Seto thing was hilarious! I don't think I'll ever get over it!

Hey, do you know of any fics with a similar take on Yami's reaction to not being Pharoh? It's funny, especially how you've put it, and I need the laughs right now...BYE! **is hyper**

Nice fic! Bakura is very sadistic...

This was really funny! I enjoyed it! 5 stars (out of 5)!

PS- That book (Pharaoh Fantastic) sounds interesting. Who's the author?

Hello,
I have already read your Kawai fic. I really like Yami Yugi on that situations (Me ancanto no se como agradecerte).
Jamata Atode, Miyu.

That was HILARIOUS. Heh, you don't see the ego-ish side of Yami much anymore. Funny dere.

One thing you should know is that you always put a comma before/after the adressee's name when using direct address. You do it most of the time, but not in some instances.

“How are you feeling now Yami?” Yugi asked.

A comma would go after 'now.'

Other than that, really sweet ficcy. LOL, Bakura is CRAFTY!

Peace,
Eki

thats funny i liked the story alot i lol at one part

Bakura was so cruel giving Yami the flu like that but at least Yugi got to see Yami's silly side thanks to the flu anyways very good

Kawaii!!

bwahahaha that was so funny! sad yet funny really mean bakura and funny Yami ^_^ I saw the picture to, hm interesting ^_^

hehehe.. this is just so funny, i love this fic! keep up the good work!
xamosy^-^

Hehehe! I loved it! Fantastic!

this was so great! *is still laughing* so like bakura! (yup, that pic was very cool) kawaii!