That was really good I loved it. Thanks for writing this story. I really did like it.

it was really.good..luv it a whole lot

tHAT IS GREAT I LOVE IT KEEP WRITING STORIES YOU HAVE THE GIFT FOR IT

There's no way that the doctor would find cancer in Ponyboy's stomach and not tell his guardian about it. That would never happen

Hey! My internet got fixed! Yay! Good job just a few lil grammer mistakes no big deal! I loved the story and am lookin forward to reading more of your outsider fics if there is to be any. Well good luck with the rest of your writing till I see you again bye!

omg i didnt know u wer from germany lol!

i just wasnt sure if the gang knew pony had cancer because they didnt act scared or anything-they just acted like he said 'hello' and nothing serious like u had said (u wrote that he would most likely die

also, the epilogue sort of disappointed me in a way... i was expecting to know how he went through his cancer and a few more chapters (3 at least if he was gunna live) not just a few sentences like u did

It was such a good story. I hope you write another story soon. You did an excellent job on it. Good luck to you.

there are clearly some grammar issues still but dont get me wrong this is really good still. is the gang gonna find out about pony's cancer? (oh and for the grammar issues u might want to try using Microsoft Word or a program along the lines of it)

Great job. I wasn't expecting that one, but it was excellent. Can't wait til the next chapter. Update soon.

this is good, but remember, in real life no one talks as properly as you have them. you want to make your characters seem as believable as possible

Excellent! You did a great job! Still need to work on the grammar a bit. Other than that it was great. Can't wait until the next chapter.

The formatting is a great improvement. Good job.

You still have some problems with grammar, but it's more understandable now anyway.

You seem to be making Steve a little too evil. But, hey, I never really liked Steve very much, so go ahead and make him as evil as you want. (Heh.) j/k. I imagine he'll probably change a bit when he finds out what's really wrong anyway.

I don't think Soda could 'let' or 'not let' Darry do anything, including punching Steve if he wanted to... I mean, if Darry wanted to badly enough, he would. Also, you seem to have Darry 'growling' a lot. I'm not sure what that's supposed to mean, but he's not a dog. It just sounds a little funny.

Basically, I think if you flesh out all of the characters as you go along, it will really help. Don't just let them be one-dimensional. (Like, Soda's always understanding. Darry's always overprotective. Steve's always mad. Twobit's always joking. Stuff like that.) There's a lot more to them than that. They are all multi-dimensional.

Just a few of my thoughts. But, the story's just begun, so you have time to do all that still.

I'm just trying to give some suggestions for the story because I think it's an interesting story. So update soon!

hey! My internet went out so I was not able to keep up with the story! We are trying to get it fixed! Anyways awesome updates! Can't wait for more! Poor Ponyboy!

Very good. Your doing an excellent job but try and make sure it flows together smoothly.

-oh i'm fine now lol-

you fixed a lot of mistakes! yay! now this is gooder (i kno its not a word lol) fic than it was before!