Great story. Eager to read the next one.

Wow, you managed to write some weird variant of slash/violent/fetish porn... umm, congratulations?

Seriously, this is something that I've noticed in a lot of stories that have ANYTHING to do with Harper and his past. Yes, he had it horribly rough; yes, it was, literally, hell on Earth for anyone who happened to be homo sapien. But good god, you people aren't satisfied with just the horrors of war; you write some kind of exotic kink centered around massive amounts of rape and violence that it takes on a very S&M quality and is, quite frankly, disturbing and insulting to the show and the character.

Two words: Grow Up.

COME ON! You have to keep going! Please?

One word...Wow! You need to continue this! Please, please, please write more! Don't make me beg...but I will anyway, please, please, please...

good so far,I would like to see how this turns out.

this is really good! i wanna know what happens! so please keep going!

good start. Please write more soon.