Pretty.

I love this beyond description. How can something so short be so powerful? *envies your writing talents*

wow, amazing, i must say... Very insightful, and... dare i say touching...? I( am impressed, just reading this i can feel a heavy pain in my heart..

That was pretty touching... I like poetic stuff like this, and you have quite the talent for it ^_^ A few grammar errors here and there, but other than that it was some brilliant work. Keep it alive!