This story was fantastic.
You, as a writer, brought life and a real sort of 'human' element into the world of Morrowind. I also loved the twists you added on to the story of Lord Nerevar. They were original and compelling. Your characters also had a great deal of personality and realism to them. They were psychologically sound and overall I found them engaging and vibrant.

"Great, he thought, another seek-and-find errand."
That quote made me laugh -- because that's all you do in the main quest.
:3

~Darkrin

Vow. Greatly written. That Nekros fellow adds to tension.

Wow.. just wow... I love this story. It's wonderful, and three guesses who my favorite character is. *whispers* Saber... lol, but anyways, I'll be sure to read all of your stories and leave reviews there too

I am loving your stories about Saber there is good character development throughout, I have just read Challenges and Pelagiad Escort and I am going to read your other stores. I noticed a few grammar and spelling mistakes (eg. you have a tendency to write thru rather than through in your text) but that is to be expected when typing large amounts. Overall, your stories so far have provided an entertaining and enjoyable read!

I'll just say it simply; an excellent story. Will read the rest some other day. Very well-written, so I am looking forward to it. :)

Though I haven't nearly finished this story, I have to comment- wow. This is awesome. This is the way Morrowind should be written, as an epic adventure with a bunch of intricate plot twists, two fascinating characters, and a little romance.
It has that little humour that Morrowind offers too, but I love the detail that you add to your story that the game offers too, while the dialogue flows very smoothly and is excellent to read.
Probably the best part is reading this story, reading about Eiryn and Caius, her visiting Eight Plates and the House of Earthly Delights, and then drinking some strong Dunmer brew, it's reading that kinda stuff and then actually being able to do it in the game that is fun. You managed to really weave the game and a story together.
Excellent job, kudos to you. I raise my bloody glass of flin and salute you.
Smurf

Well, here's my review of the whole shebang! I will never be able to play Morrowind again without looking to see Saber and Eiryn around somewhere. I find myself wanting to rush to Kogoruhn to go help Saber :-) Utterly gripping, more real than the game itself. Certainly worth the two days I spent reading :-) Thank you!

hah, has Saber forggoten so quickly that he's the Nerevarine?

HAH!! This plan of Nekros' won't work. He's already immune to every desease on the planet AND blessed (or cursed, depends on how ya look at it) with eternal life. Everyone knows you CAN'T transform into a Vampire once ya cure corpus, not even a Werewolf.

This plan will backfire... BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Well, I have to say, your story is one of the neatest things I have ever read. You have such interesting characters! You took the ever known plot of Morrowind and spiced it up with unusual people. I like everyone you've stuck in there: Eiryn is just too cool! She handles everything very nicely and I even like how she stood up to Caius (but that was a little ways back, right?). Merithisan is pretty cool, too, but I think it's Saber that's the best. I love his attitude, his aspect, everything about him. He just has this personality that makes me laugh. No wonder Eiryn is attracted to him (**winkwink**).
Hell, you know what? I even like Nekros, too, as psychotic as he is. I'm not sure why. Maybe because he IS psychotic. I have strange tastes. So sue me... :P
I love the story so far. I dearly hope you continue this. I wanna see what happens!

P.S. This is most definitely going in my favorites, so I have easy access to it!

~Catoni15 ^_^

That is the best Morowind fic ive ever read. The references were perfect. I could picture everything hapening in my mind. The characters were so awsome imade them on my Morowind game. Your own inner stories like Necros and Caius were well blended into the game. Also dont forget about the stories, especially when the new Elder Scrolls game comes out. Again well done and keep up the good work. toodles

what?! the end? nno! not yet! want more!
ow wait, there's gonna be more...I hope very soon!^_^
succes!

Thanks! A fitting end to a great tale - even if it is a 'stay tuned' end!

I look forward to reading some of your shorts.

So this story ends, and a new one will begin. Suppose that makes sense.

Can't wait for more Chronicles.

Sorry to nitpick, but stalactites are the ones that come down from a cavern's ceiling.

Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next! You have a kid to take care of, and writing a great story at the same time. I can't even finish a story with my own schedule and writer's block. Good work!