Lynn, I absolutely love this! I'm a huge C/A shipper, and I can imagine this situation so easily.

*poke*nudge* Write more KH fics?

Hmm... surprisingly, extremely well done! Most people on can't write very well, and are reduced to merely reviewing. Yet you can write very well, and it shows! Excellent work.

Short, but very sweet, and the revelation at the end of the flower bookmark's importance is staggering and well-laid. Good work.

Your Fellow Author,
-Silverlocke980

P.S. It is my policy to review at least one work from the author that first enters a review of a new fic of mine (assuming, of course, that they are not already a friend of mine) but if this is your normal work, I may review more!

Also... if you wish to read absolutely *excellent* fanfictions, then I suggest visiting Guardian1. She writes beautiful Kingdom Hearts fanfiction, and /The First Ghost/ could be a wonderful "sequel" piece to your own work.

Kudos!

Short, but I like it very much. :D Gives me a mental image of Aerith waiting while Cid gets the guy and hauled him home.

Ah, why didn't you say you wrote this?! Looks great, can't wait for you to update! =D

Wow, you have officially mastered the english language. Your imagery was executed flawlessly and, while short, your fic left a lasting impression on me. The description was gorgeous and I am stunningly impressed, which is an exceedingly rare occurance, lemme tell you. The emotion was pulled off perfectly, it left the reader feeling for the character without falling into the melodramatic arena, something I fall culprit too almost everyday. (Ugh, being an angst writer has so many pitfalls. . .) You left me salvating over my keyboard and glued to my monitor. I never knew a website could be so terribly addicting. I'm craving more, and I'm praying to God Almighty that this isn't a one shot. If it is, I demand you to write more to quench my urgent literacy desire. Otherwise, I will suffer intense adjective withdrawl, and you don't want to be responsible for that, now do you?