really good did sora follow riku

AW

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Aw! Ha ha.

This is really great! Good Characterization, and a creative Plot. Clever methods and ideas, I LOVED god/goddesses Leon/Yuffie etc. you wrote them each well and i adored their interactions. Wonderfully sweet and dramatic, a real fantasy classic.

Real well done. Added to favorites.

(Added to Kit's 100 Fanfiction Summer Challenge as entry number 3. Not a real honor, but wanted to give you a head's up. Let me know and i'll Edit/Remove it.)

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Well i just started reading this story today, and i was so captivated by it that i couldn't leave this spot until i was finished. I litterally cried while reading this. You captivated their love in a way that i have never read before. It was so beautiful. You even ended it in a way that i was never expecting; which made me cry even more. Made me think that life really is like this. You were born with a gift and you are a fantastic writer. Im glad i had the chance to read this.

OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL AND AWESOME

Cookie

Aw.. that is soo sweet! and they don't even mind that they're boys heheh... though having them gods watching everything that your not aware of is kinda like rude or something.. nice story! :3 ja!

Wow, this was a really good story. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. You are very talented. Also, great plot and you were very original. _

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Your writing is so beautiful. I really like the beginning of your story, because it sets a nice tone.

aw! I love the story! It's incredible! So many twists! That's so cute! I love it! I'm going to read it again and again! sequel by any chance?

Wow! That's one of the best SoraXRiku stories I have read!

i thought ur story was so good...i cant wait to read more from you!

you are amazing and that was so cute!

well at least riku's strong in his resolve to pass out after they leave...

SOra a big keyhole a big key hmm (that was awesome by the way)

well Sephy has insight of the future1 awesomeness! so smaexy but painfull at the same time NE?

aw Riku forgives Sora! how charming!

And Sora hears the response and all that and he finds Riku! how well predicatble (no offessne)

NO RIKU DIES! ah well at least ansem dies as well! awesomeness!

Meheheheheheh the Gods are awesome! Yuffie is preety! *drools* and Cloud and Loen same as ever *mega drool* (those men have nothing to do up ther thy could visit me if they want) SEPHY! *double mega drool* his retty hairs are lomger! XD yeah!

aw Riku is insecure!

Sora is as peppy as ever and they KISS! awesomeness but you know Sephy is supposed to be colder and indifferent because yeah he just is really but this is a good new attitude for him! they will always have each other ne? ah well is there a nd part to thi? is there huh? huh! *whips out toast an a glas of milk* here for your hard work and dedication! *gives now onwards to other fanfics! *slinks away into dark corner* -distance- this is one of my favorites now just so you know! -silence-

so Riku is hurting and is still inlove with Sora well by now i think iwould have given up an then just turned to another person who would love me but knowing that I could never love them because i can't love I really don't want to love with out love the sting of betrayal will not last as long... Riku here is an excellent example.

well well Sora gets a the keyblde how awesome1 but still rather not love anyone at all for fear of backstabbing a bit childish iknow but its been done far too many times for me to feel that i coul give my shattered heart to anyone ever again...

i agree wihh riku to a degree I would also be happy to die (notice right now sour mood but this has nothing to do with your fic)

meheheheheheh who would have thought Sephy was so smart! well nuffsadi about them Gods must kee going..

Ah what will Sora do now! but hat this! Wakka! and tidus! 8tackles Wakka* he's ever so smaexy! *straddles* and he sound smaexy too! awesome1 I luv him but since he can't hurt me m feelings for him do not affect me previous statements! next chapter!